‘Love Of You’

Fear of finding love🌹

‘The Love Of You’

The love out there
The love we share-

I know it’s out there
Out there somewhere-

Do you dare to take
A chance-
To entertain the
Dance-

You know your hearts
Desire-
It sets you on fire

What rules do you
Require-
To get yourself
To see
That’s what will
Set you
Free-

The love you want
Shared by
You and
Me-

The fear of having
Me near-
Scares the deepest
Part of your heart-

Tearing you apart
Keeping us distances
Between-
Is it some
Misunderstood
Dream-

Fear of losing
That one so dear-
Leaves only many
Unresolved tears-
All in the fears
Subtracting precious
Years-
Never to be redeemed
For what all did
Seem
To be some far distant
Dream-

Was the love of you
Trying to show through-
Connecting us to
The love of two
Hearts
That we’re struggling
To see -
That is meant to be
For you and for me-

Destiny

Not taking the
Chance
Welcoming that
Sensual dance-
Don’t let it go
Just take it slow-

Losing
Refusing
To take that chance -

Regret it will be -
If only you’d see
That some things are
Just meant to be-

Trusting your heart
Instead of being
Torn apart -
Is the chance
To be free
A love between
You and me -

Regret you will find
If you refuse to search
And find -
That soul
meant to be

Unending emotions
Unexplained devotion-

The love
That only you knew
From the start of
Time -

Joining the ‘o’
In you
To the ‘o’
Of love -
The complete
Circle of destiny -
Finding the love of
You -
Which lies within
The love
Of me.

Oh can’t you see

Don’t prevent your
Destiny
The coming together
of
the love of you
Inside
The love of
Me .

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
4 March 2018

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

A great emotional piece. Love is truly a journey sometimes it seems. Nice job!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

It is a journey that only those who seek shall find-Thankyou I appreciate your words🌹

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome!

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, there are those who are afraid to let themselves go and give 100% emotionally to a loving relationship. Sensual yet innocent somehow. Nice rhyming. Lydi**

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Many thanks I appreciate your time 🌹

[danny]

Wow at the start i thought i was going to be moved by passion but for me it very quickly turned in to what i can only explain as a woman moaning at her man and trying to get what she wants for her own reasons i think

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Loll- everyone sees things differently that’s what makes the world an interesting place- but more like a moan for that perfect live and understanding between to loves- that are meant to be- Thankyou for your time🌹

[danny]

That sounds good a loving moan from the abyss of your being bird like calling your sweat surrender

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

What a lovely description🌹

[danny]

well it's yours not mine

[Mrudula Rani]

"Joining the O in you to the O of love the complete circle of destiny.". what a wonderful and a very original writing. Your "love of you" is absolutely lovely.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so much I appreciate your kind words🌹

[Dave]

Kelly - you put forth such an elegant plea for the one you love to take
the chance. Despite the past, to give their heart so that one and one can
indeed become one. Somehow I'm reminded of the song from the musical
"South Pacific" it is "Some Enchanted Evening". If you're not familiar with it
I suggest you look it up. It beautifully expresses the sentiments you speak of.

Take care - Dave

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

How kind of you and such wonderful words Thankyou I appreciate it will google it, you take care too🌹

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes I plea for that one whoever wherever to just give their love a chance- might miss out on the best thing of your life, fear is a terrible thing🌹

[Lorry]

I can relate to this in many ways, the most obvious being that being hurt in the past, always becomes a problem for the current someone, who has done nothing to deserve it....yet :)
The fear of being hurt again should never even be an issue, but it is, and one we have great difficulty in letting go.
I like the reminder throughout, that destiny awaits. And who are we to interfere in that? :)
Beautifully written. Personal, yet relatable to all.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kind words and understanding yes we as humans hold onto past hurts too long and deep and prevent ourselves from loving and living- Thankyou for your time🌹

[Lorry]

My pleasure :)

[mou]

many chances were not taken..many words were unspoken..still love speaks all that are truly needed. you have burnt the readers with an ardent flame of emotion.
mou.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your time and kind words- we need to be true to ourselves and listen to the truth of our hearts/ what a wonderful thing love - true love can be if you allow it when u truly feel the connection and being ‘inlove’🌹

[mou]

just beautiful..and it's my pleasure :) :)

[emmajoy]

'Joining the ‘o’ ~ In you To the ‘o’ ~ Of love - The complete ~ Circle'

What a wonderful skill you have deep, deep inside you! Start to finish you express what so many feel.. The heart's a complex creature. essential and powerful in its task.. but needs such gentle handling when it comes to love, sweet love. A length of experience clothed in truer than true thinking.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou so much for your wonderful words- yes without searching you cannot find and true love needs to be sought and understood and felt in the core of your being before you can understand being one- blessings🌹

[Richard McLin]

Such a great piece. The words you pick just hit the heart, and don't let go. This is a beautiful piece, and I hope everyone on this site reads it. Great job.
-Richard

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Such kind words I really appreciate Thankyou 🌹