‘Love Of You’

‘Love Of You’

A Poem by Thoughts In Time

Fear of finding love🌹

‘The Love Of You’

The love out there
The love we share-

I know it’s out there
Out there somewhere-

Do you dare to take
A chance-
To entertain the

You know your hearts
It sets you on fire

What rules do you
To get yourself
To see
That’s what will
Set you

The love you want
Shared by
You and

The fear of having
Me near-
Scares the deepest
Part of your heart-

Tearing you apart
Keeping us distances
Is it some

Fear of losing
That one so dear-
Leaves only many
Unresolved tears-
All in the fears
Subtracting precious
Never to be redeemed
For what all did
To be some far distant

Was the love of you
Trying to show through-
Connecting us to
The love of two
That we’re struggling
To see -
That is meant to be
For you and for me-


Not taking the
Welcoming that
Sensual dance-
Don’t let it go
Just take it slow-

To take that chance -

Regret it will be -
If only you’d see
That some things are
Just meant to be-

Trusting your heart
Instead of being
Torn apart -
Is the chance
To be free
A love between
You and me -

Regret you will find
If you refuse to search
And find -
That soul
meant to be

Unending emotions
Unexplained devotion-

The love
That only you knew
From the start of
Time -

Joining the ‘o’
In you
To the ‘o’
Of love -
The complete
Circle of destiny -
Finding the love of
You -
Which lies within
The love
Of me.

Oh can’t you see

Don’t prevent your
The coming together
the love of you
The love of
Me .

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
4 March 2018

© 2018 Thoughts In Time

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not all are able, or dare to walk through "unpredictable" Love without thinking of anything, but to enjoy each step of the road, and feel blessed, on the other hand, sometimes when we love someone so much, the fear of losing them might get bigger and bigger, controlling us, or thoughts, emotions and reactions, this is never good and might ruin this love.

You seem to know, understand and feel love in the many concepts it holds, I enjoy reading Your thoughts, as well here too, thank You my friend. wishing You a most wonderful week a head💜

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Thoughts In Time

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Very wise words and yes we need to understand and know love in all levels- much blessings to you for.. read more
we often prevent because we are still venting the past and laying that on our new possible loves.
i have had women say to me..."i am not her"---that is a truth that is too often hard to realize.

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Thoughts In Time

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So right you are we live in the past and allow fear to prevent us from finding our true soul mate at.. read more
Wow so moving, and yes I agree that if you don't take a chance you will never know that kind of love, I have and wish I had it back.. and I am fighting for it...

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Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

Trust in all things good— be honest and open and never give up hope🌹Thankyou for your time🌹
We can cry and we can die. We can live and we just survive. Love is a honor to behold and to know.
"on’t prevent your
The coming together
the love of you
The love of
Me ."
Sweet and wonderful words dear Kelly. Can tempting fire grow stronger or are we wild fire destroying everything in her path? Amazing words shared. You made me wish to write.

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Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

In the wildness of her is the burning desire and unquenchabke flames of true love lasting eternity t.. read more
Coyote Poetry

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You do and you are welcome dear Kelly.
Very well written, and something many people can relate to! I love the rhyme and how you painted a picture of two people going back and forth from should we or should we not. Amazing work!

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Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

Thankyou for your kind words and yes sometimes we miss out on what could be the best thing ever beca.. read more
Good thoughts to expand upon...

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Thoughts In Time

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Each one to expand on his own🌹

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Added on March 4, 2018
Last Updated on March 4, 2018


Thoughts In Time
Thoughts In Time

Essex, United Kingdom

Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..


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