‘D Day’

‘D Day’

A Poem by Rose Petal🌹
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Final ...🌹

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'D Day'

The words have
Been said, the truth's
Revealed -
The heart
Doth hold
No lies-

The time has
Come for the
Final gun
To be sounded-

D Days time
Is here-
The line been
Crossed many
A time-
And the hearts
Going to
Now yearn
For its loss
So dear...

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe

11April 2017

© 2018 Rose Petal🌹



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Very profound and powerful. I felt a real sense of sadness as truth be told, closure is sought.






Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Weeks Ago

So true- yes it was in an instant and it was done - sometimes better that way- Thankyou for always u.. read more
I love the way your main message is elusive . . . it could be a demise that happens in a number of different directions. I love the way you use the title, which refers to a famous war battle, to symbolize a battle that's raging inside this narrator's heart. Mostly, I love the way each line feels like a sad pronouncement of finality, supporting your overall suggestions of what's about to happen here, but still maintaining an elusive sensation shrouded in mystery (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

Thankyou for your generous review and understanding- yes when it’s final there’s nothing left to.. read more
I'll admit my heart skipped a beat from the first stanza. Such a powerful write and even powerful message. Very nice write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

As long as no as your heart skips and beats I’m glad - many thanks for kindness🌹
Lavi

3 Months Ago

Anytime, the heartbeat is one of my favorite things to listen to ^^
Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

And the best🌹
The time has
Come for the
Final gun
To be sounded-

Such a great piece, well written, and packs a punch, an emotional one. I read this one a few times, and each time it made an impact. Great job, added to favorites.
-Richard

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

So kind of you I really appreciate your honesty and feedback , I’m glad you enjoyed it🌹
When the final guns are done. What is the leftover? When deciding winner and loser. No-one truly can win. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

If love is true both win and the score is even nothing to compete with - true love is a balance like.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are right. Love shouldn't never be war. Should be the best days of our life.
once certain words have been said...the war is over and it is time to move on...
to live again...truth does set us free...
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

Indeed it does- sadly some people hold themselves captive in the mind can’t see past the pain hurt.. read more
This is so profound my friend, I also thought of it as "Death Day", and how Your words can apply to us all... very touching, some of Your expressions are really moving and like always, powerful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

Thankyou much love 🌹
D days can also turn into new beginnings, as well as days of out with the old.
I really like the no lies part. I think when the air has been cleared and truth told, then what occurs from that is what should be, for good and for bad.
With honesty, comes first sight of the complete picture of what you have, or had.
Good luck either way.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Rose Petal🌹

3 Months Ago

Truth is the only way 🌹Thankyou for your time 🌹

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Rose Petal🌹
Rose Petal🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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