‘Separated Souls’

‘Separated Souls’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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‘Separated Souls’

I searched
I found-

My soul
It drowned-

What was this
Soul that I’d
Now found-

The ground
It shook-
My love it
Took
To another
Level and
Time-

Smiles across
Miles-
But tears don’t
Know
The distance
Heals and
Steals-

Longing
And loving-

Escaping and
Waiting-

The truth it’s
Stood the test
Of time-

Will it make
Your soul
Mine-

Wishing
And
Missing -
Souls entwined
And
Kissing-

Oh soul

Are you listening.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
7 March 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹



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Your poem certainly describe the saying absence makes the heart grow fonder. Its difficult and frustrating being away from the person you want to caress as much as possible. Yet, I think with the right mindset and actions you can get to them. This was a wonderful piece for me to read and I encourage you to keep writing and growing. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou again- and yes not easy being inlove with that soul you have never met but longing for but .. read more
Nicely woven word sounds & rhymes like a tumbling spill of feelings with good intensity. The final line sorta changes everything, with this thought-provoking hint of a reason, but that last line also puts the entire message in the frame where it's meant to be (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou kindly I’m glad you enjoyed it- warm regards🌹
Your words cascade like the pendulum sway of a leaf falling to the ground. Poetic and beautiful...what more could there be?

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for you loving words, I appreciate it 🌹
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Zoe
Beautifully done this one. When two souls in love, even when they are physically close to each other, feel there's a gap between them, a gap in their relationship, it's a total pity and if that gap cannot be done with away with, it's better that they do away with their 'relationship'. I really liked this one. Great rhymes, and a great poem overall!

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou I’m glad you enjoyed it - yes there’s a gap sometimes when you are together but the gap.. read more
Zoe

6 Months Ago

You're welcome
We must listen. If we don't listen. We won't hear the sweetness of the words. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the powerful and worthwhile words. When we don't listen. We can miss everything.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

You are so right the hearing is in the silence of many words deeper than sound, Thankyou for your ti.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Always my pleasure and you are welcome Kelly.
Love this so much. I can relate. It's like having had loved and lost it. Like you're fighting for love and obstacles keep getting in the way. Great job.

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for taking time I really appreciate it 🌹
Love the short stanza descending down through the write; like an ethereal thin link between kindred souls holding their love together over an earthly distance. Has that tender ‘Ahhh’ factor … :-)

Posted 6 Months Ago


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

How wonderful you are - thanku and I’m glad you enjoyed it and it awoke feelings within you - yes .. read more
Tears dont know the distance, just as the heart, mind and soul work on different units of measurement.


Posted 6 Months Ago


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Yes so true are your words- the depth is deeper and intuition stronger on a soul tie level🌹
Lorry

6 Months Ago

Sorry about that. Hadnt finished, just hit the post button.
When souls touch, fate listens.<.. read more
reminds me of what Dusty Springfield once sang..."wishin' and hopin' won't get him into your heart"

nicely expressed as always.

j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

So kind of you- I appreciate your presence- yes we wish we hope we dream we believe- all shall be as.. read more
how tenderly longingly You've described the "distance" love... if it's the physical distance or the invisible distance like time, in some of Your words I felt an unrequited love, in some I felt the separation of the loved one, in other I felt like ate in love with someone from the far past, no longer is here, in any ways, like always I enjoy reading Your thoughts and feelings, thank You my sweet friend.

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for you time and wonderful review- I’ll be off from work tomorrow and Friday then can be .. read more
Light

6 Months Ago

all the best for You in Your new job 🌟🌟🌟
&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Many thanks🌹

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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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