‘Window Of Time’

‘Window Of Time’

A Poem by Thoughts In Time

Passing picture of thoughts moving through time 🌹

‘Window Of Time’

As time,
Its stationed
But passing,
By glancing out
The window pane-
I look and
' What's there to gain?'
The seasons
And the
Falling rain.

Its plain
Set in
With all
The answers

In time,
A tale
It will unravel,
Through trials
And tests,
Deep rest-
For a space
In time,
Where out
Of devine intervention,
We will see
The Godly

The test
Of the
Locked up
In time-
Reveals in
The end,
Its only a mime,
By the
Tick tock,
In time....

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
8 March 2017

© 2018 Thoughts In Time

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An amazing poem here. We never know the true results of our time in this world, but we have to make every moment count. We don't know the number of trials we'll have or how hard they'll be. Yet, I think they're more great things in your life to see. Nice work! Take care and keep writing. :)

Posted 4 Days Ago

Thoughts In Time

4 Days Ago

Life is full of surprises but each one must be felt out of the heart and spirit- Thankyou again, I a.. read more
Window of time....yes, that is all we have to live our life.

Our journey is not finite; as the hands of our life clock ticks away we must live and learn, face our trials and fall or overcome them. For our journey is always full of mystery and surprise and the journey beyond our existence even more so.

A very philosophical piece, nicely written and expressed. Well Done.

Posted 1 Week Ago

Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

Thankyou kindly- if we only new what the future had in store but then again it wouldn’t be so myst.. read more
even if we did things we regret...they are all part of the learning process...and of who we are today...so we need to accept that....and live with the person we are now...


Posted 1 Week Ago

Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

Very true , Thankyou for your kind words🌹
All we have on our plates this day are memories which used to be dreams... Dream well :)

Posted 1 Week Ago

Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

You are correct and we live and learn but life remains a mystery , Thankyou for your time🌹
Life is wonder and mystery. If some asked me 40 years ago. Where would you be in 40 years? I wouldn't think I landed where I did. Time, need of the heart and the need of the flesh. Things we decide. Wrong or right. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 1 Week Ago

Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

I agree and we must pray for a nice ending.

1 Week Ago

I really enjoyed this.
Thoughts In Time

1 Week Ago

I’m glad you enjoyed it Thankyou for your time🌹

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Added on March 8, 2018
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Thoughts In Time
Thoughts In Time

Essex, United Kingdom

Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..


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