‘Just A Dream’

Damaged dreams of destiny🌹

‘Just A Dream’

It’s all just
Part of a dream

It seems

Your ‘I wish’
‘I yearn ‘
‘I just might’
‘I dream on it’

That’s where
I belong
In the ‘dream box’

Lost
Without a cost
Only to be found
By the sound of
Your searching
Heart
Only set to depart
From a part
Of your soul
That your thoughts
Only know
And go

Just a dream
A vision
Set in revision
Out of touch
Not important
Enough
To become
Concrete to
Your heart beat

In excitement
It leaps
Using the words
‘ you are mine
To keep’

On and on
My heart weeps
It walks many a
Lonesome street
Strangers it does
Greet
Knowing that it
Will be in the showing up
Of self
Without a doubt

The dream will scream
And shout
And makes its
Presence felt

On it waits
Every thought
It contemplates
Irradicates
The possibility
Of fate

To find your
True soulmate
What will it
Take

Memories
Promises

Fake
Visions
Bringing division
Between
Your hearts
Desires

Dulling the fires

Leaving your
Heart
Rested and tried
Having lost
All of desire

What was it
That you required
To fulfil
The dream

So innocent
Pure
Deserved
And
Serene

That is
Our dream.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
30 April 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

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Neville

some say that life is but a dream... I dream in colour and oh so vividly .... a poem enjoyed and a dreamy one too.. N

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Dreams are to be sought after..,not caught up in lies keeping one tied to the place they put themsel.. read more

5 Years Ago

my sincere pleasure as always...

Fame

Wow l loove your work.... So easy to relate to and when I go through a poem or a story I want to be able to relate to it and feel the connection......

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

I’m so glad you feel that way Thankyou for taking time🌹

Traci

Dreams inspire us. We must follow our hearts to live our dream.
Love your work, words of wisdom, written from the heart and soul, and it's felt.....thank you!

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Thankyou kind soul and yes when we are wise we recognise that wisdom in others I sense a great deal .. read more

Coyote Poetry

The dream of many.
"So innocent
Pure
Deserved
And
Serene "
I need the above words. Some people cannot find this place. Amazing and wonderful use of words and thoughts dear Kelly.
Coyote

That is
Our dream.

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Oh Coyote- if only u follow your heart all things are possible- the mind needs to become quiet so th.. read more

5 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Kelly.

sette

dreams inspired us to make life happier and easier

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

Sometimes people use dreams to cover up three truths- never actually intending on making them come t.. read more

5 Years Ago

totally true

Chris Shaw

Keep dreaming. Never give up on your dreams. Your poem had great flow, danced along nicely and I enjoyed the internal rhyme. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

I’m glad it pleased your heart- thanking you kindly🌹

jacob erin-cilberto

"a dream in revision" is better than giving up...maybe we will get a higher grade---i dream of the serene as you express...just some serenity and contentment.
your expression has such great beat to it...the rhyme, the in-rhyme...rolls off the tongue effortlessly.

Posted 5 Years Ago

5 Years Ago

And I pray you find what you are dreaming of and seeking that all your dreams come true- blessings a.. read more

Ghost

Dreams are nice if they become reality.. But sometimes what our reality is doesn't fit our dreams... But I say never give up on your heart, your reality, your dreams because one day you will wake up and wonder where everything went... Thank you for sharing