Little Girl Red

My favourite colour is red.

My favourite colour is red.

My favourite person is dead…

 

Mommy told me to go to bed

And so I played with my toys instead

And Daddy said, “Sweet, we need to talk,”

And I got mad…

My favourite colour is red.

And so I went to the kitchen sink

And said I was going to get a drink.

Then I pulled out the shiny, sharp knife,

My favourite colour is red!

Then I took it up to my Mommy’s bed

And plunged it deep into her soft chest

And Daddy came when he heard the screams

And I made Daddy bleed…

My favourite colour is red!

I snuggled there right beneath the sheets

And their warm blood spilled over me

And I licked it off of my sticky arms,

My favourite flavour is red.

My favourite person is dead.

Now when I walk down the streets

I smile and when the smile back at me,

I pull the knife from beneath my clothes,

My favourite colour is red.

So many people lying around me,

Their rancid stench helps me sleep,

One day I will be on the TV, and everyone will see.

My favourite flavour is death,

My favorite person is dead,

My favourite colour is red.

Author's Note

This is a song I wrote. And it is to be sung as a lullaby.
Except the song is different.
This is the poem version.
hgsdjgfGF PSYCHOPATHY IS FUN

Reviews

[MissEpic2902]

Whoa... This gave me the chills!!

[Brittany DeFranco]

wow, this child is demented o.o I love it though

[Brandon S. Whitten]

I just don't know about kids these days. Y'all are so disturbed it's actually funny.

[MerinxD]

This is so compelling. It destroys me and heals me at the same time. Haha. Good job :)

[pumpkin head]

loved the last 4 lines of this, This is amazing!

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Lizzie Borden with an axe
Hit her father forty whacks
When she saw what she had done
She hit her mother forty-one

[astoundinglyattractive]

Oh my god that's great xD

[Sarusai Hiryu]

It's a limerick I read back in school, in a book called Enjoying More Poetry.
This poem just reminded me of it so I wrote it instead of a conventional review.

[astoundinglyattractive]

It was accepted and appreciated

[Autumn]

Amazing poem, the concept is fabulous! The rhymes flows perfectly.. I love the originality of this piece. The repetition fits beautifully. You have a great talent for poetry!

[The Great Brain]

Death, psychopaths, and little girls, oh, joy! How unnervingly pleasant. The girl sounds so innocent, yet so psychotic. And who doesn't love a good, psychopathic story? Somehow it's happy yet so scary at the same time. You take us through the mind of the person speaking, and, if you've read any of my writing, I love it when people do that, taking a trip through a psycho's mind. Even though it does creep me out a bit that you even thought of this, great job. Remind me to stop shopping at Target and stick to Walmart. Much safer in the blue.