Spring

Flowers from stones,

stones from flowers,

that's a vivid picture

of rhapsodic spring.

The smell of mountains,

and the bees is buzzing,

everything just buds and swells,

rejoices to the spring.

Satisfied sun,

is winking from the sky,

it scatters heat,

just how it needs.

Foaming stream

of a large happiness,

it's crushing in the waterfall

through a mountain of flowers.

Drops of water

in the sunny rays,

whole spectrum of colors,

rainbow's are signs.

In this small waterfall,

soar like a bow,

a one small rainbow,

in the heart of the mountain.

Reviews

[BLBrown]

I like this, although I'm struggling a bit with meaning. It reads like an homage to spring which is nice. ..and maybe the circle of life. I like the phrase,

"Flowers from stones,
stones from flowers,
that's a vivid picture
of rhapsodic spring."

Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice artwork and beautiful words. Spring allow us to dream and hope. A rebirth of chance and beauty. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[The Flame of the Knight]

I like it.... A few places you should put a different word in there but all in all, i like it......

[Suditi]

Wow!
This is so happy!
Beautiful imagery.
The flow, the theme, the very essence of this poem, is so joyful.
Love it.

[Sydnye Louise]

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[MOON]

Lovely imagery , you have described it so well.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Cool pjesma! Vesela tema mi uvijek dolazi kao dobro osvježenje, pošto često čitam mračne stvari od ljudi XD
Samo tako nastavi! :)

[Kes]

You're great with words! Your use of imagery is always astoundingly effective.
Love it. :)
K

[Robbie]

"Satisfied sun,
is winking from the sky,"~ There is smile in this... you have vividly described Spring in the peak of it glory! Lovely write. :)

[Richy Moon]

It is a good poem, I like your use of nature :)