Sleep Child Sleep

Sleep Child Sleep

A Poem by Falcon1
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For the love of a child I hold dear.

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Poem title Sleep Child Sleep
Falcon1

Sleep Child Sleep
Don't you make a peep
Come on my Grand Daughter Dear
Let your mind Clear!

© 2018 Falcon1



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Gentle, kind and beautiful words shared my friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


You should probably just post what you have to write without the picture gimmick. It cut off the end of the third line. It wasn't helping anyway.

It's a bad idea to use visual media sometimes, it comes off as a crutch if you don't do it right. The backdrop picture crap, yeah, you're not the first to try it... it's almost always a waste of everyone's time and it is very far from original.

Focus on the writing first. Worry about the flair later.



Posted 3 Months Ago



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Added on February 2, 2018
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59 years young father of 2 girls in they late 20's early thirty's have 3 Grand children one a boy and two darling little girls boy age 7 Girls ages 4 and 1 and they are lots of fun. I enjoy writing po.. more..

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