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falling apart

falling apart

A Story by Ena Lona Kendra

Sometimes I wish that duct tape could hold me together.
Sometimes i wish the stitches actually worked
maybe
just maybe
I wouldn't be falling apart
at the thought 
of you leaving or moving on.
I know
I sound like a child
" grow up"
"quit it"
the words that are always spoken to me. 
they hurt and all I have to say to you is 
" Please love me." 
but I am afraid that you will claim I'm clingy 
and not want to stay any longer
so don't delay
because if you 
take any longer
I'll fall apart

© 2015 Ena Lona Kendra



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That is pretty deep. The way you talk of duct tape and stitches in the beginning and then about falling apart subsequently is impressive. The words have been arranged perfectly. The poem has a smooth flow and each line brings with a new intensity and a fresh feeling. Good piece. Keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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That is pretty deep. The way you talk of duct tape and stitches in the beginning and then about falling apart subsequently is impressive. The words have been arranged perfectly. The poem has a smooth flow and each line brings with a new intensity and a fresh feeling. Good piece. Keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand this poem. Life can make us feel like we are losing it. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the good ending. Thank you Ena for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


I found this to have an emotional connection to everyone who's been through this. You spoke through your heart and soul, which most people can't do. Well done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


sad write,break up`s are always difficult

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

just my luck !
Ena Lona Kendra

1 Year Ago

Yeah lol sorry
 wordman

1 Year Ago

friends forever we shall remain

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Added on December 16, 2015
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Ena Lona Kendra
Ena Lona Kendra

ocala, FL



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