I Will Live On

I Will Live On

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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My Song I Will Live On

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To know you can’t cry
To know you must leave
To see fighting can’t help
To see Death Won’t go away
I Guess I’m just unreal
Can you hear me
Read this final note I leave
In time you’ll find that I
I love you
But when you’re gone
I will live on
I will live on now
Not to know when we’re done
Not to know your heart has stopped
Not seeing time is running out
Not seeing my soul fall
I Guess I’m just sick
Will you hear me
Read this final note I leave
In time you’ll find that I
I love you
But when you’re gone
I will live on
I will live on now
Hate fills me now
Hate is what I need
Sorrow was isolating
Sorrow is what you gave me
Read this final note I leave
In time you’ll find that I
I love you
But when you’re gone
I will live on
I will live on now
A Fallen Hero - I Will Live On
Written - 31st december 2009
Dedication - Louise Soendergaard

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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FallenHeroXx
Honest oppinion

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I know the feeling of this poem. I made myself sick many years ago over a woman. Taught me to separate the emotion of real life and love. The poem description told a strong story. I like the last lines.
"I will live on

I will live on now"
These are the words that allow us to overcome the bad things we will encounter in a life.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


you have a real gift for this. i can sort of sing along with this, though i can't sing very well. but it's a powerful piece, not so dark this time. it's uplifting to me

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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