Life

It’s nothing more than a scar

It’s everything but a tear..

 

It’s love never ending…

It’s hate never fading..

 

I’m worn out…

I can’t see the end of the arguments…

Everything I end up f*****g with…

That perfect picture frame shattered in the dust of my wake…

And I fall behind again..

I always fall behind…

That’s the whole problem..

It’s so disappointing really..

 

Then i collect my thoughts..

I see myself lost..

No fear..

I see how nothing I do turns out okay…

I see how many I’ve hurt..

I see that my intentions are always good..

 

As my body comes into contact with the concrete…

I say to myself..

Get back up..

Because even though I’m defeated…

I’m Still standing..

That’s my problem I guess..

I have yet to back down…

And when I do..

I think I’ll snap..

I’ll break like the silent sheath of paper on which I write…

And a tear forms..

Falls..

Reviews

[Namelezz]

I think I’ll snap..
I’ll break like the silent sheath of paper on which I write…
And a tear forms..
Falls..
Drops from the edge of my chin to fall down on her face...
She'll look up at me and gently kiss my lips,
softly and slowly...
She'll let me know that she'll catch every tear of mine
Be there...
Forever,
and always, whenever I need her...

[Morrigan Nicole]

Read a few of your things, and all I see is sadness, depression, a never-ending trail of tears and heartache, yet I find I enjoy it. Not your pain, but your art, your words they call out to me, and I can relate.
life is hard, but nobody said it would be easy.

[K-mo]

this is very good!

[Color of the Iris]

I know poems are a collection of thoughts and emotions, but whenever you write, it's almost like you can't control your thoughts and emotions as they come out onto the page. They're really random, but yet easily understood.

Great work, Fallen.

[Brook Hughes]

Truly.. a very sad poem.. but when Namelezz added lines it changed the whole theme of the poem. Great job.. it has a nice flow to it and was well written.. u truly have an amazing gift.. dont be afraid to show it off!:)

[stars are far]

This was a nice piece of writing..
Keep that man...

[Dayran]

A hero who falls loses an ideal. A man who falls loses pride. A woman who falls loses love. A queen who falls loses the world. Help her and she'll help you. Nice!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to read your amazing poetry. I believe our scars are the mark of a life trying to love and testing life. Ain't easy for no-one. We must know tears and joy. Otherwise we are just dead in spirit. No weakness in the outstanding poem.
Coyote