No One's There For Me

a poem about no one understanding, i had to write this all over because i put my comp. to sleep in the middle of it...(the first one was better)

No one's there for me,

As I stand in pain amongst the crowd,

Being pushed and shoved all over,

Not being helped one way or another.

 

No one hears me when I am calling,

Hoping for someone to listen,

But they just keep pushing,

'Till I'm on the edge of my strength.

 

No one sees me,

As I am reaching out,

For a hand to help pick me up,

Off the ground where I lay.

 

No one understands me,

They think they know it all,

I try to find someone,

But no one's there for me.

Reviews

[KEENAMARiE]

beautiful..simply beautiful.

[Char]

i kno how u feel

[Jessi]

Wonderful write. I love it. It is well written. It shows all of the pain of being alone with no one who understands

[CJ]

im always there for u ur my best friend


beautiful poem....

[Astrid Hamilton]

I am!

(You keep on' writing, too. Show your sorrows through and through,
words,
never becoming hollow
if appreciated)

[Sarah]

I can definitely feel your frustration and loneliness with society in this piece. It's something that we've all felt at some point, the feeling that no one understands or recognizes us. I think this is really beautiful, great job! (:

[Justin Tobey]

Beautifully written. Your choice of words was very eloquent, and it really flows. The whole poem really conveyed the feeling of lonliness, which (I think) you were trying to create. I feel that this poem, however sad, really came from the heart. This gave it a real depth. Great write, and welcome to WritersCafe!