Hated

A song I wrote.

I am hated by you guy

I can't dry my eyes cause I am bleeding

Here you can try to throw me down

Beat me to the ground

I will see you screaming

 

We're in the dark can you see me

I can see you you're blind in the heart

Do you remember about when you raped me

I know you do it wasn't long ago

 

Why are you trying to make fun of me

you think it's funny what the f**k you're doing to me

And I know that you're gonna hurt me

But right now I think that I will hurt you

 

I am hated by you guy

I can't dry my eyescause I am bleeding

here you can try to throw me down 

Beat me to the ground

I will see you screaming 

 

I remember all those things you did to me

Now I have rage in my heart

I remember all those things you said to me

Now allmy pain will be poured onto you

 

Why are you trying to make fun of me

you think it's funny what the f**k you're doing to me

And I know that you're gonna hurt me

But right now I think I will hurt you

 

I am hated by you guy

I can't dry my eyes

cause I am bleeding

here you can try to throw me down

beat me to the ground

I will see you screaming

Reviews

sometimes people create monsters, and they don't even realize it.

[Kloud_Nine]

hmm, sounds alot like Evanecence, I don't remember what the song was called though - but I do like that touch. Good Job.

[Jasmina Amethyst Pendra..]

I agree with John Common. This is an extremely powerful poem and props to you for sharing it with us.

Liv

[John A Common]

Very powerfull.