Mortal Sin

Probably the darkest thing I thing ever wrote.

Play the drums of heaven, flee from here to a remote land
The scourge of your people threatens to destroy the man
When the swords plunge into your souls, you will rest in peace
Now I want to pass my sentence on your Holy Priest.

The light of the sun is suddenly ebbing away
The earth will be embraced by the flames in this day
Even the most gallant of my heirs among the men
Will be terrified of the beginning of the end

You will know that it's me when I turn my back on you
I will put the bodies of your sons inside their tombs
I will throw your rotten bones into a sea of lies
My black soul will be your curse for the rest of your lives

Reviews

[crisybear]

This is plagurism...

I know this is against the law, so if you are not a member of Dark Moor or have the rights to it, than it is best that you have be taking this off of a site claiming it yours. AND at 17 years old, I don't think it is yours... but I could be wrong (would have made you like 9 years old...?).

Anyway, I am just saying.

[Emily Burns]

can you explain this?

[crisybear]

http://www.tsrocks.com/d/dark_moor_texts/edit_mortal_sin.html

go find it! Indeed.

[Legion]

Why don't you tell them who really wrote this! Do I need to review your other pieces as well? And I say "yours" figuratively not literally.