Cupid's Lesson
A Poem by Liliana
Surrender, oh Cupid, your arrows
For my heart does sorely weep
I have carelessly fallen in love
With a man I cannot keep
One request I ask of you
Have mercy and accept
Please make him fall in love with me
For I seem to be inept
He is willful, change not that
But more accepting he must be
Persuade him to fear love less
And in thought to be more free
He is all I have ever wanted
All I wish to apprehend
If not for me then for loves sake
The rules of love must slightly bend
CUPID: I cannot do this thing you ask
In the end free will decides
Love, it is a fragile thing
Without will, then love, it dies
LOVER: I beg of you, persuade a little?
You need not change his mind
Nudge him in my direction
My heart is breaking be thou kind
CUPID: My dear, he has made his choice
He had his chance and walked away
I cannot perform this thing you ask
For I cannot make him stay
LOVER: But he is all I have ever wanted
All I wish to apprehend
If not for love than as a favor
A single arrow might you lend?
CUPID: This goes against my better judgment
I cannot condone this sport
My arrows are meant for passion
Not for hunting of this sort
Then Cupid turned his back
As the lover wept and grieved
But what Cupid had not known
Was of the arrow she had thieved
She walked away without a word
With a smirk upon her face
The only thought upon her mind
Was of her lovers sweet embrace
She did not think before she pricked him
With the arrow she had thieved
And it wasn’t before long
That again her heart was grieved
Again she went to Cupid
And she admitted what had been done
She explained the arrow worked
Though still his heart she hadn’t won
He was with her, yes he was
And they were lovers, yes indeed
But love cannot perform
When it is taken out of greed
Cupid tried to tell her
The error of her thought
She could not attain true Love
For Lust was whom she sought
© 2008 Liliana
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I love the dialogue. I think this poemis great. It shows that true love can not be stolen or bought. It has to be true and pure for it to be right I love it.
Posted 2 Months Ago
This kind of makes me think of the anti-valentines day poem. Very witty and very good. I like how you turned it into a dialogue and madea great lesson out of it. Bravo.
Posted 10 Months Ago
This kind of makes me think of the anti-valentines day poem. Very witty and very good. I like how you turned it into a dialogue and madea great lesson out of it. Bravo.
This made a great read, thankyou, a fantastic write!
Posted 11 Months Ago
This made a great read, thankyou, a fantastic write!
Cat, this is an amazing write, but then that is the kind of poetry you write. Sensational. Love ya Cat.
Posted 1 Year Ago
Cat, this is an amazing write, but then that is the kind of poetry you write. Sensational. Love ya Cat.
This is an amazing write!
Congratulations on a WELL deserved win!
I'm reminded of how far away I am when I read such perfection! :)
Admiringly,
The Duchess,
Posted 1 Year Ago
This is an amazing write!
Congratulations on a WELL deserved win!
I'm reminded of how far away I am when I read such perfection! :)
Admiringly,
The Duchess,
Another amazing piece.
Your rhyming is flawless.
Great work!
-E.M.R
Posted 1 Year Ago
Another amazing piece.
Your rhyming is flawless.
Great work!
-E.M.R
This is a great poem! I do like how she stole the arrow--that's a new idea--but in her greed and lust she still lost for her motives were wrong. I am glad to have read it.
It's very well-thought-out, with a moral at the end that a lot of us need to consider! Thank you for posting, this is a great write.
Posted 1 Year Ago
This is a great poem! I do like how she stole the arrow--that's a new idea--but in her greed and lust she still lost for her motives were wrong. I am glad to have read it.
It's very well-thought-out, with a moral at the end that a lot of us need to consider! Thank you for posting, this is a great write.
This was interesting, i liked the part when she just took the arrow. evil laughter*** But I guess when anything is out of greed, nothing pleasurable will come of it...
Posted 1 Year Ago
This was interesting, i liked the part when she just took the arrow. evil laughter*** But I guess when anything is out of greed, nothing pleasurable will come of it...
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Added on November 17, 2008
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Liliana Dayton, OH
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Throughout my life I have been accused of being a dreamer, as if it were something to be shunned and corrected. People wonder why I go through life with my head in the clouds. Well, thats an easy answ..
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