Agent of Chaos

Stuck with the monster,

Which lives inside me.

Sometimes I want it. though.

Sometimes I want to be free.

Putting step in the bliss,

Get caught and monster's kiss.

He snatched away my love,

He snatched away my reign.

It's hard to live while he lives,

Try and try but then forgive.

They are afraid when I'm around,

It's me who was let down.

Tearing my clothes he comes out,

Burying me inside he runs out.

He is the toughest obstacle.

And his chaos is unstoppable.

Reviews

[AshlynnStyx]

Fourth stanza second line it should be burying. Not baring. I relate to owning an inner monster. Amazing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you..

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree the hidden monsters can be dangerous.
"Tearing my clothes he comes out,
Baring me inside he runs out.
He is the toughest obstacle.
And his chaos is unstoppable. "
I liked the above lines. Realistic thoughts and place we can know. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Krutika]

The theme behind the lines reminded me of the book I read called 'The Monster Calls'. It's one of my favorites and that's why I get the battle that goes on the inside. Nicely put :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much krutika

[Jessica Lima]

I like it over all. But I'm a compulsive reader, and the poem needs a bit of editing. :) keep at it

[Farhan Shaikh]

Its okay..i will

[Homason]

nice title...nice body....wonderful lines...great message.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you homason for your kind words

[Long Whispers]

I loved the theme it holds!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you azeefa for your kind words

[CAPOLAVORO]

This one express a great thought about one's own emotion. Thank you so much for this.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much for your time

[richieb]

Strong expression of inner emotions. Your writing creates an imagery that all of your readers will be able to relate to. Good work Farhan.
Richie b.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Richie for your kind words😊

[Manu]

I feel two energies exist within us- negative and positive. When the negative energy overpowers the positive one, then comes the real problem. It effects us like our split personality. It is difficult to fight out that inner demon.
I absolutely cherished this piece, Farhan. You are going great. Keep up the good work. God bless :-)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much Gorthi..it really means a lot

[mercy party]

A friend told me once..."know that when you lock your demons up, behind the door they are doing push ups."
Loved the personal/ universal effectiveness of this poem. Good!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you mercy I appreciate it