I'll never give up

Even if my head starts bleeding,
Even if something comes across my leading.
I'll never give up.

Even when my eyes are shutting down,
Or if my head is without my crown.
I'll never give up.

Even if i lose the things around,

Or there's no one to save my background.

I'll never give up.

Until when i breathe my last,
I know hope dies but destiny doesn't.
I'll never give up.

Reviews

[Chase Dylan]

I will never give up, never give in... Can not destroy destiny... Not even with a laste breath... I had some inspiration injected straight to the veins with this one... Bleeding or not... Wonderfully penned...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much for your kind words 😊

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, most welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and hopeful words. I liked the positive energy and the will to succeed. You are right. Never give-in or give-up. Thank you Farhan for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for reviewing

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Priyanshi]

Good one, you must never give up...it's inspiring .Moreover rhyming is superb...well done.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much😊

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.

[Surya]

Interesting it is....And truth you said here...I enjoyed it...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much buddy

[Abraham George]

i love this and i connect this to one of my fav song in the name of Lyrics " Never say Never" by JB.

i loved it. keep going my friend.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Abraham☺

[wordman]

we should never give up,we live forever

[Farhan Shaikh]

Correct mr.wordman..thankyou

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is very inspirational, i really enjoyed it. well done:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou xoxo☺

[Carol Cashes]

Yaasss! I love writings about fighting, never giving up and surviving.
"...Even when my eyes are shutting down,
Or if my head is without my crown." No Matter. What.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, thanks for review ☺

[Anjali]

Amazing! It's so good! The rhyming scheme is just perfect and the emotions that you have shown in this is just mind blowing! Such an empowering write!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Anjali

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Mr.Writer]

Such an inspiring, beautiful and powerful poem Farhan!!
You perfectly rhymed the words and it was just amazing!
Well done, keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you shaan

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)