Wonder Girl

Wonder Girl

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

If you are the moon,
Then I will love to be the only star around you.
If you are the ocean,
Then I will be the only ship sailing in you,
Whenever you thunder yourself,
I will be the clouds to shower rain
Girl, I'll be your hope,
And you'll always be my belief.
You're that rain
Which showers itself on dry soil.
That music which I listen the most always reminds me of you.
If you ever feel lost,
Seek yourself from my heart.
You won't be alone anymore,
When our souls intertwine.
You're the wish,
I've wanted to be true.
You're one of the best gifts
God has ever granted me.
If you are a book,
Then I will love to be the best pages in your chapter.
You are my vision,
You are always in my dreams,
Till now, you were the only flower in the pot,
But now as you've got me,
Together we will make a beautiful life like a garden.


© 2017 Farhan Shaikh



Author's Note

Farhan Shaikh
Yes, she's my friend..just letting her know that the world hasn't ended, she was special she is special and she always will remain special.. your reviews will help her to know.

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That musics (MUSIC) which I listen the most
You're one of the best gift(GIFTS)
or You're the best gift

Wow Farhan...its simply fab....loaded with feelings and love....
Any girl would fall for this...
Poetically it's beautiful...i loved the words ... They create magical ambience... Great job ... wish you all the very best
..looking forward for more

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

8 Months Ago

Thanks so much 😄



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A wonderful poem shared for love. I loved the complete poem. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Days Ago


Wow I can relate to these selfless words of comfort..very romantic poem indeed..checkout angelic girl and dada on my page..when I read your words I felt it was a mirror to my own dangg :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Sure... thanks
This write is full of pure emotions and real feelings, this poem has touched all of us readers. Well done Farhan, this was an amazing piece of writing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


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You're a keeper . She's so lucky to have you .


Posted 6 Months Ago


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I will be your only, your one and... The only ship to sail... A deep feeling from that line alone... Deep as a fathomless sea of longing...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Yet again, you touch me with another wonderful piece. The only thing I would tell you is to divide it into stanza- like skip a line every so often. I would recommend skipping a line after "And you'll always be my belief", "When our souls intertwine", and "God has granted me". I would also recommend that you put the line "If you are a book, then I would love to be the best pages in your chapter"- i would put that line at the beginning after "If you are the ocean I would be the only ship sailing in you," because where it is now, it's kind of awkward and seems as if it was just put in there. But other than that it was a really beautiful poem accompanied by a wonderful picture.

Posted 6 Months Ago


such a good read..well, it happens when someone is special to us we tend to build a fence and protect them with all our might..ahahaha..lolz

Posted 7 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

7 Months Ago

Haha l! Thanks so much 😄
natzky

7 Months Ago

welcome..continue on writing:)
Farhan Shaikh

7 Months Ago

I will for sure
Wow this was good! The only part I personally would have changed would've been to, If you were thunder... that's the only part I would've changed... This was amazing.. thanks for writing it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much😄
This is simply a amazing poem! I believe that anyone would be honored and truly grateful to have an truly amazing friend like you. From this piece I can tell that you are someone who says what they mean, doesn't go back on their words, is caring and will be loyal to whoever you are friends with as well as to the people you are close to in your life. Again this is an wonderful piece! Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much😄
All the writers have pretty much said everything I wanted to say:)
This wonderful poem will surely delight your wonder girl:)

Posted 8 Months Ago



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Added on August 25, 2017
Last Updated on August 27, 2017
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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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18, student. Slytherin. Earthling. I'm a kind of guy who never really fitted in this world. Follow me on Instagram @farhanshyk02 more..

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