The last note

The last note

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

Ain't anyone found me in the teared shirt,
Cause I've been treated like dirt,
How do I move from this dark desert
The hell so much I'm hurt.
I needed them but they don't,
It's like their heart made of stone.
They all wanna sit on the throne
and threw me on the hell zone.
Spoke words that doesn't made sense
Ain't anyone was in my defense.
Was on my knees and pleading
Show some mercy I'm bleeding.
Put my shoes on your feet
Try to feel what it's like to be me.
They thought I was a piece of joke
They didn't thought that I'm broke
Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke
and they were like "oh look that crazy folk"
If I'm anyone of them 
I would've tried to end this painful fire.
Looked up at the fan and the chair down
Tied up the rope making the end of a clown.
Goodbye note I penned
"MOM, here my story ends".


© 2017 Farhan Shaikh



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Zoe
Ah, I can sense much emotion behind this. Most people can relate im sure. Strength and determination are all that takes to thrive in this heartless world. Never give up. Good work!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Omg! I've been gone for a while and just look at the way you've grown!! It's well-penned and creative.
I love the last line.. Great way to end a great poem.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Your writing skills are commendable! The way you have described the tormented soul is amazing! Only a few have the flair of expressing sadness so beautifully.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much for that Jiya..it means a lot
From where i can see this is a life journey of a person who suffered a lot and end up losing his hopes... you able to express those feeling in few words.. Heads off...

Posted 1 Month Ago


A beautiful and somewhat tragic portrayal.... Smoke and crazy folk... That ending was a neat sum of emotional dismay... I really liked this, and your writing has grown... Excellently penned...

Posted 1 Month Ago


The words hold a suspense only to leave a pang in the end. Wonderfully portrayed.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

2 Months Ago

Thank you..
This is a deep emotional piece it grabs your attention, and forces you to read to the very end. I liked it very much and thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much
The last note is so touching...
A rumble of hidden feelings portrayed well in this.
But I noticed some lines that have to be perfected( 5th & 6th) even though the reader can understand what you intended.
Pleasure to read from you!


Posted 2 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much
"Try to feel what it's like to be me.
They thought I was a piece of joke
They didn't thought that I'm broke
Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke"

Nice title and poem. A sad but good one.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

2 Months Ago

Thank you 😊
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Welcome...................
What a lovely poem Farhan, glad to see see your work again :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much Joey
Joey Nizz

2 Months Ago

Your welcome buddy :)

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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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18, student. Slytherin. Earthling. I'm a kind of guy who never really fitted in this world. Follow me on Instagram @farhanshyk02 more..

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