The last note

The last note

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

Ain't anyone found me in the teared shirt,
Cause I've been treated like dirt,
How do I move from this dark desert
The hell so much I'm hurt.
I needed them but they don't,
It's like their heart made of stone.
They all wanna sit on the throne
and threw me on the hell zone.
Spoke words that doesn't made sense
Ain't anyone was in my defense.
Was on my knees and pleading
Show some mercy I'm bleeding.
Put my shoes on your feet
Try to feel what it's like to be me.
They thought I was a piece of joke
They didn't thought that I'm broke
Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke
and they were like "oh look that crazy folk"
If I'm anyone of them 
I would've tried to end this painful fire.
Looked up at the fan and the chair down
Tied up the rope making the end of a clown.
Goodbye note I penned
"MOM, here my story ends".


© 2017 Farhan Shaikh



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A superb poignant poem in impressive rhyming. Appealing and expresses so well. Thumbs up young poet.


Soo nice to read from u again, pls comment/review my newest poem too, would like your thoughts on It too, , on suicide.

Posted 6 Days Ago


Farhan I really appreciate this poem. I can see the emotions transcend in this poetry and the feelings with which you've authored this. Bullying is a big problem in today's world and a stigma and there has to be an end to it. Lovely write! Keep it up .
I love when people write on social causes :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Farhan Shaikh

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much
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Wow, This is so good, Bullying is horrible. I was bullied, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Farhan Shaikh

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much
Urgghhh!!!! Why did you write this!!!.... Got me goosebumps... Sorry... By why did you write ... I was actually carried away by the emotion... 😅. ... Your subject is so strong and amazing... Bullying is something that has to stop... Well... I loved the poem... But it did made me sad😑... Hate you for that... Great job... Keep on writing... So good to read a familiar writers work after so long... Thanks for writing... Good luck Farhan

Posted 1 Month Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Month Ago

Haha! Sorry for making you sad... but I feel thanks is in order
heartspeaks

1 Month Ago

I loved this peice
You can feel the intense emotion, the pain, a sense of hopelessness and frustration. You can tell this came from deep inside you. You did a very good job expressing yourself!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Month Ago

Thank you..
what a great write!!! raw, real and such honesty. amazing!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Sad to read.I hope encouragement finds you quickly.

Posted 1 Month Ago


wow! such raw emotion this write, so poetic as well. this is very well written.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Month Ago

Thank you 😄
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Zoe
Ah, I can sense much emotion behind this. Most people can relate im sure. Strength and determination are all that takes to thrive in this heartless world. Never give up. Good work!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Omg! I've been gone for a while and just look at the way you've grown!! It's well-penned and creative.
I love the last line.. Great way to end a great poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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