The last note

The last note

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

Ain't anyone found me in the teared shirt,
Cause I've been treated like dirt,
How do I move from this dark desert
The hell so much I'm hurt.
I needed them but they don't,
It's like their heart made of stone.
They all wanna sit on the throne
and threw me on the hell zone.
Spoke words that doesn't made sense
Ain't anyone was in my defense.
Was on my knees and pleading
Show some mercy I'm bleeding.
Put my shoes on your feet
Try to feel what it's like to be me.
They thought I was a piece of joke
They didn't thought that I'm broke
Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke
and they were like "oh look that crazy folk"
If I'm anyone of them 
I would've tried to end this painful fire.
Looked up at the fan and the chair down
Tied up the rope making the end of a clown.
Goodbye note I penned
"MOM, here my story ends".


© 2017 Farhan Shaikh



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A beautiful and somewhat tragic portrayal.... Smoke and crazy folk... That ending was a neat sum of emotional dismay... I really liked this, and your writing has grown... Excellently penned...

Posted 1 Day Ago


The words hold a suspense only to leave a pang in the end. Wonderfully portrayed.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thank you..
This is a deep emotional piece it grabs your attention, and forces you to read to the very end. I liked it very much and thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much
The last note is so touching...
A rumble of hidden feelings portrayed well in this.
But I noticed some lines that have to be perfected( 5th & 6th) even though the reader can understand what you intended.
Pleasure to read from you!


Posted 1 Week Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much
"Try to feel what it's like to be me.
They thought I was a piece of joke
They didn't thought that I'm broke
Meanwhile i walk home through the smoke"

Nice title and poem. A sad but good one.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thank you 😊
Sami Khalil

1 Week Ago

Welcome...................
What a lovely poem Farhan, glad to see see your work again :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much Joey
Joey Nizz

1 Week Ago

Your welcome buddy :)
beautiful poem!! I like it very much.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thanks bela
This is so sad and touching! The last lines,

Goodbye note I penned
"MOM, here my story ends".

are my favourite. What inspired you to write this? You've conveyed the feelings - so crystal clear - it's admirable. Keep it up!

Love,
Vasilees

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much for your time
Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

As I titled it as a last note so everyone person who take these kind of steps...mother will be the l.. read more
Poem is amazing...and well weaved it....you wrote it wonderfully...obviously a sad poem, but really loved it.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Farhan Shaikh

1 Week Ago

Thank you priyanshi
Priyanshi

1 Week Ago

My pleasure.
certaily a sad place to be,lonely and hurt

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Farhan Shaikh

3 Weeks Ago

Yep.. thanks for your time

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