A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

© 2018 Farhan Shaikh

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blown away by the last line..pen..! really the strongest weapon that can be held by someone in those blackish day..wonderful

Posted 10 Months Ago

Love this piece. I am sure many of us can relate to the loss of our glow. The way that you represented the life of this individual speaks volume to what is happening to others around us now. Your use of imagery brought the poem to life along with your use of other figurative devices. I appreciate your work because it is different making it very unique. Keep up the good work, continue to write and do not allow the negativity of others to stop you from writing. I am truly amazed when I realized that persons are still able to fully express themselves through the beautiful art of writig.

Posted 11 Months Ago

that picking up a pen is better than any other action he must perform, while....and about this poetry, i must say that it is relatable...
Good work Farhan.

Posted 11 Months Ago

So very written and set up.

Posted 11 Months Ago

Strong and worthwhile words shared. I felt the honest statements leading to needed end. Sometime to write is our dead-end. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago

stuck in a dream,now you can write your self out

Posted 1 Year Ago

Wow nice! Loved the last line! The pain you have written, it can be felt while reading this. Keep writing!

Posted 1 Year Ago

This needs to be edited a little. Very well tried to express other's feelings. I liked the idea that you are doing something different.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on January 6, 2018
Last Updated on January 11, 2018


Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India

18, student. Slytherin. Earthling. In case you don't know, I'm a weirdo, I don't fit in, I don't wanna fit in... Follow me on Instagram @farhanshyk02 more..

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A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

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