He Stayed

Reviews

[richieb]

Your poem is heartfelt. There is strength and courage in your words.
Richie b.

[KCthelastboyscout]

This is a divine love.a connection of a lifetime.the truest form of commitment

[Najam Us Saher]

He was a kind man I can say, to stay along her. Writing this as a image conveys great emotion. I really liked this.

[Erudite]

Gorgeous. If that can be said about a poem. Barley girl is right. It's what we all wish for.

[barleygirl]

This is what we all wish for, if we don't already have it. Someone who will stay thru the tough times, as well as the good times. You show that in your poem, which interestingly goes from slightly distraught in the first stanza to being a little borderline freaky in the second stanza. This bizarre twist in your message feels strange & slightly threatening (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Priyanshi]

Beautifully written "He Stayed"...loved the writing style and the meaning behind the words.
:))

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks Priyanshi

[Katelyn Kennedy]

I like the use of consonance; it really stresses how meaningful it was that "he stayed".

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much for reading 😄

[Suhd]

There's a contradiction I'd suggest proofreading.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for that😄

[Autumn Falls]

This would make a great emo song lol but really, i love it!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for reading 😄

[wordman]

so he did the right thing,he stayed

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yes indeed.