Raindrops

Short journal

I silently watched the raindrops fall and I imagined what would it feel like to fall smoothly into where I belong. It is a very ticklish and amusing feeling yet very new . To be in place, in time, and with people   would make a good definition for an existing life. I examined a raindrop fall . It was beautiful. It was powerful. I drifted and so did my imagination. I imagined those raindrops as people falling and falling with their stories invisibly attached on them. They would go  places and no matter where they land, their stories would always lag behind them. I wondered what story that each raindrop carried and I wondered too if those stories are happy ones or stories that are painfully sad.

I have always thought my own burden was heavy, I probably never thought and looked at the other raindrops. But when I did , I saw something  I never saw before simply because I had never looked . I saw them struggling to fall. Shocked and open-mouthed, I looked at myself, shocked again , I saw myself mid air falling behind already.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Noor.92]

Such a deep writing. Every person has some story attached to him/her and each one thinks that his is the most painful, burdened one. Being compassionate with one another, that's what is most needed.
Really liked the piece, Farrah!

[Farrah]

Thank you Noor! I am glad that you enjoyed it.

[nightshade]

I liked this piece. it was short to the point and nicely worded. I loved all the imagery and feelings that you captured here.

[Farrah]

Thank you!

[Ted Kniffen]

A lovely bit of prose. You've captured the description of the human race very well. There are many 'raindrops' in a storm, we are each just one. Good write.

[Farrah]

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it! :-)

[Ana Papaya]

Very unique idea Farrah. I like it.

[Farrah]

Thank you!

[1VJ]

Poetical personification of rain, the petrichor is wafting from your delightful manifestations! :)

[Farrah]

Thank you greatly for taking the time to review my writing!
Btw- I love your comment and especially the last part. Even your comments are poetry! :-)

[1VJ]

You're sweet. :) The pleasure was mine!

[Joshua Marshall]

Oh my God! It was powerful.

[Farrah]

Thank you so much for your encourage words! :-) You really made my day!!!

[Bear]

What a great writing exercise, your concept is creative and your descriptions inspire strong imagery. It is work's like this that sharpen a writer's skills and opens the way to publication. I enjoyed reading it Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Farrah]

Thank you so much for your kindness Bear! You, through your reviews, encouraged me to write more! :-)