Now I know; what I never knew

Now I know; what I never knew

A Poem by Destiny Dreamer
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"Worst feelings are, when you realize someone special to you doesn't love you the same as they did before"

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Now I know; What I never knew
Suffer the misery of your absence,
shattering my dreams one by one
Endure the grief of your distance,
it's like drowning deep to the sun

I see this, not more than a punishment
Nevertheless, wonder what I did wrong,
only loved you intensely with affectionate heart
O I feel weak, once I was so strong

Pain of realizing, you don't yearn for my love anymore,
struck my chest with an arrow at the left
I have lost comfort from life,
you broke love's law, you're my heart's theft

The idea of losing you frights me with pain,
it takes away my dreams, now through eyes I only weep
You loved me too, once you said
Too many promises that you made, yet couldn't keep

The sorrow in my heart,
makes me miserable and weak
Like knives your words scratched my heart
Agony it is, now for the cure I seek

When the evening shadows creep,
my heart cries tears
When I think of not having you by my side,
it struck my heart with fear

 Though, my only flaw was to love,
and to reveal my feelings to you
Yet, you went astray from what you said,
and now I know; what I never knew

© 2015 Destiny Dreamer


Author's Note

Destiny Dreamer
Very THANKFUL to all of you for taking out your time. Hope You'll like it! :)

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It's amazing how something as awful as heart break can create something so beautiful in the form on a poem. When I read this I felt pure emotion erupting from it. The hurt, the pain, it was all there. You know it's a great poem when you can give your reader a taste of how you feel. Great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Aww U MADE MY DAY! Thanks A lot for your ENCOURAGING Review. Thank You so much!
Amber Lily

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome! :)



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What a great sad feeling your words created in my mind..... No words to explain.. It made me think of my past sorrow when I was left by my bestie..... Really no words could describe our loss of love , loss of care.. Good job dear.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometimes we have many things to say but the words aren't enough for it....that's what i am feeling right now......
It's Betrayal and yes it hurts, it hurts so much that it can't be measured.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Absolutely!! Yup Of course! And THANK A LOT for Ur review!
It's amazing how something as awful as heart break can create something so beautiful in the form on a poem. When I read this I felt pure emotion erupting from it. The hurt, the pain, it was all there. You know it's a great poem when you can give your reader a taste of how you feel. Great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Aww U MADE MY DAY! Thanks A lot for your ENCOURAGING Review. Thank You so much!
Amber Lily

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome! :)
"my heart cry a tears" to "my heart cries tears". Only my opinion. Very nice piece and the pain comes out in this work of the love that went away.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Thanks A lot ... I'd change it. U always help me make it perfect THANKS A LOT!
The loss of a loved one is so difficult. I cannot express the profound sadness I felt when I lost the one I loved. Wonderful, melancholic piece, I feel like this is quite accurate and liked the imagery employed in your writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Yeah you are right. It hurts too DEEP :/ Thank You so much for your kind review! ^_^
So very heartfelt, I admire your writing.
You write well for one so young. Great work! :))

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Aww THANK YOU very very much! It means A lot! ^_^
Cherry Pepperweb

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)
Great poem as always
When the distance between two people increases
And if they truely love each other
Thier distance will make thier love even stronger
Patience is the key here sis.....
:):):)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Yup it is .. And I agree with YOU! Thank You so much for checking it out! ^_^
A very emotional piece of writing straight from your heart to the pen and to the paper. You showed us vivid imagery with your words and the sorrow you are going through. Sharing something so personal is the hardest part but is always the best poetry of all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Indeed, I agree with you and Poet shouldn't be afraid of hiding their feelings. Poet should have fre.. read more
Miss Dreamer, your are amazing. A powerful and emotional ride in your poetry.
"The sorrow in my heart,
makes me miserable and weak
Like knives your words scratched my heart
Agony it is, now for the cure I seek"
The above lines were my favorite. Raw and the feel of realness. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

OMG! Do U really think? Thank YOU very much. I'm so Thankful to you. Your words always encourages me.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Was my pleasure to read your word and you are welcome.
Awwwww......one of the greatest horrors i could imagine in my relationship with my cutie, was if he didn't love me like he said he does. Or that he didn't feel the love i continued growing towards him. Well written, as always :) this is going to my favorites :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

^_^ COOL! :)
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) lol soooooo many smiley faces... :)lol
Destiny Dreamer

8 Years Ago

lOl :D :) :) :) :) ^_^

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Destiny Dreamer

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