The Turns And Strolls

The Turns And Strolls

A Poem by Fabian Franco
"

My perspective on life.

"
"The Turns And Strolls" By Fabian Franco

The sharp turns of life is only a phase.
It ends abrupt or just fades.

Yet the strolls of the actions done are boisterous.
But it well be forgotten, recycled for the generations to come.

Some will be remembered, most will be forgotten.
Let's spend the time we have with some gratitude.

For we are merely flickering candles.
Destined to burn out eventually.

© 2010 Fabian Franco


Author's Note

Fabian Franco
Like a reviewer once said on another one of my works it's a little cliche.
Hopefully I'll be better in the future.

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you are excused for using a cliché, as long as it's intentional and well carried out. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


the disintegration of "us"
this is reality.
i took a look at your note, if you want to edit it in the long run, don't change the ending!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hmm I don't know what it is about this writing,
But it makes me think of the seasons.
The first two lines fall,
second winter,
third spring,
and fourth summer.
I like this

Posted 13 Years Ago


So true, but does the flame ever go out?
A thought provoking poem hon, love it!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Personally, I really liked it.. the topic was kind of a cliche, but it was executed with originality.
I think that the last couplet could be one sentence, separated by a comma rather than a period. And I love the second to last stanza. :)

Great write. c:

-Coral-

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the structure, suits pretty well with the thought. Greatly done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem... good thoughts.

I also like the image, I believe it's from Alex Pardee?



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

true!
very nicely done.
(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a great piece of work! I especially love this line:
"Some will be remembered, most will be forgotten.
Let's spend the time we have with some gratitude."
It's what I try to do each and every single day! Keep up the great work man!



Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a smart poem; an intelligent, insightful read! Well done; this is great! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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