Bartholomew

An epic, romantic tale of how a young widow's love and dedication for her deceased Bartholomew drives her to forfeit the normal designs and rites of mortal relationships.

The lantern sways, as shadows flash,

Mists draped in night so still;

Illuminating fleshless arms,

Creep-out along this hill.

Such guardians of soul-less mounds,

Wooden markers of the poor,

Bow in hallowed reverence

As sentries evermore.

 

Weeping, yet un-frightened,

She trips between each aisle;

Casting light against each stone,

Acknowledge each beguiled.

Then memory finds her grasping,

And clenching cold, damp stone

Denoting ‘neath a vacant plot,

For he never did come home.

 

‘Pon scattered grass and gravelly dirt;

Drops to reverent knee,

While fanning simple pleats about,

Her dress, in modesty.

She twists the knob and raises wick;

And it curls with cloak of flame.

She whets her lips, inhaling deep,

Then summons ‘pon his name:

 

“Bartholomew,  Bartholomew,

Can you see that I ‘ave come?

Are you near, me sweetest husband?

‘Tis I, your Mary Dunn!

I had me thoughts to come t’night,

To ‘ave a word with you,

That’s pressin’ on me heart so fierce,

Ya’ ‘round Bartholomew?

Aye, that’d be just like ye some,

To wait fer me confess;

A’twisten’ in me awkward words,

No salve fer me distress!

Yet I�"I need t’hear yer voice

An’ calmin’ words to heal,

The anxious quiver, here, inside,

A’longin’ to reveal.”

 

The widow paused, collecting will,

And questioned own intent;

To cast a net to spirit’s world,

Dispensing her repent.

She wrings her fingers nervously,

While waiting ‘pon the dead;

When suddenly a breeze did rise,

Then a hand upon her head.

 

“Mary Dunn, me Mary Dunn,

‘Ave not better things to do;

Than wander ‘bout such crypts at night,

A’hovered by the moon?

What keeps y’here in dank an cold,

So callin’ out fer me?

Ye know fer fact I’m dead by now,

An rottin’ in the sea!”

 

“It’s good to see ya’ too, my love;

Better then, to hear;

That death din’t take away that tongue,

Or how ye prone t’snear.

I ‘spected that I’d smell ya’ first,

That rancid scent o’ whale;

Yer eyes were once quite darker,

Yer skin not quite so pale”.

 

The spirit corpse then spun about,

Examined high and low,

The fiery bride he’d left behind,

With heart so still aglow.

Warmed by her excited eyes,

And cheeks so pink with life;

He felt a distance aching,

Longing for this wife.

 

“Ye got a bit of lonely, Mary,

That why ye come tonight;

‘Spectin’ glimpse ‘ov me, like this

‘Wud turn ya’ heart to right?

Sensible is how ye was,

Yet be scurryin’ to find,

Such wisdom in yer harkin’,

To terms ye felt unkind.”

 

“Stop with ya’!  Stop with ya’!

Ya’ stubborn, briney goat!

T’wasn’t me who boarded ship

An’ failed to keep afloat!

Aye, the heaven hasn’t tempered,

The iron in yer will.

Judge me not Bartholomew,

One, amongst the krill!”

 

The bearded ghost then chuckled,

‘Til tears came to his eyes.

Proud he was to have such time,

To spend with feisty bride.

He then retreats in silence,

As he gleans from her distress,

That she torments with a secret,

To him, she must confess.

 

“"Bartholomew, me love,"
she embarks to make her plea,
"Ye left me young an' fruitful still,
yet no child ‘pon me knee.
I'm not as sturdy as y'think,
An' tremble at the thought;
deprived I am of husbandry,
my womb be saved fer naught."

Without ye then, I’ll ‘ave no spring,

No child to remind,

Of splendid days, brighter sun,

Me husband now divine.

I’m askin’ yer forgiveness,

And yer permit to pursue,

The kindly callers come to me,

In absence then, of you.”

 

“Yor speakin’ of the cooper, Tim,

Or Drew, the smithies’ hand?

Aye, better off with men who keep,

Their feet upon the land!

But Tim, I’m sadly knowin’ that,

His time is comin’ due;

An’ if a child be yer design,

There ‘ain’t no seeds in Drew.

 

I’ll not be one to keep ya’,

To an empty marriage bed.

Lord knows ye d’serve a finer life,

Than keepin’ with the dead.

But ev’rythin’ that’s in me,

Needs ye hurt no more.

Death ‘as grant me favored eyes,

I ‘adn’t known before.

I’ll come ‘ere, e’vry night,

An’ visit, yer desire.

Honest, I will always be,

Tendin’ yer require.

Love ‘been mine for days of flesh,

Then, for eternity.

Go then now, me Mary Dunn,

An’ make a life for thee.”

 

With courage she did leave that night,

With freedom soon realized,

To pair with then, another mate,

Forsaking former ties.

Yet, on the night that followed,

And for thousands after, too,

She chose the comp’ny of the ghost,

Her lost Bartholomew.

Each night she braved nature’s serve,

Through rain, or cold, or sleet;

Imbibing ‘pon such moment’s time,

To feed on love so sweet.

Each minute spent, Bartholomew,

Rejoiced in hardships, laughter;

And only God and Time will know,

Such treasures in hereafter.

 

One night, amidst November freeze,

Mary staggered there,

Among the stones akin to home,

With her husband shared;

Lungs revolting, gurgling swell,

Mouth of staining red;

Contrasting earthly suffering,

Found solace ‘mongst the dead.

 

Fevered to delirium,

Wet, silver-tainted hair,

She settles ‘side familiar post

And finds him waiting there.

Struggles so to form a breath,

In hopes that she may speak,

Surrendering the day’s accounts;

But fears she is too weak.

 

“Aye, ‘tis time, me Mary Dunn,

A’time that ye come home.

Beyond this night, forevermore,

Y’ll nev’r be alone.

I wish that I could reach ya’ now,

An pull ya’ ‘cross the veil

That’s kept us ‘part these many years,

In spite of what’s prevailed.”

 

“So ‘lighten me, me whaler man,”

She coughed a pale reply.

“Why’d ya’ choose to lie to me,

To keep me as yo’r bride?

The cooper, he outlived us both,

Eight children sprung from Drew;

Ye lied to me for all these years,

What say, Bartholomew?”

 

“I feared me own accord, me lass,

From terms set forth above;

Ye cannot cross to waitin’ home,

Unless ye go with love.

An’ I, but one love known to life,

This chance then rest with you

To be me escort to the Lord,

This, I say is true.

Should ye have taken ‘nother man,

I feared that ye’d be his;

An’ ye’d be taken up with him,

While I’d be left like this;

A-hoverin’ in between such space,

An’ time, by lonesome self;

While pinin’ for me heart of life,

Me Mary’n, no one else.”

 

“Aye, such flat’ry from des’prate ghost;

It was my life ye know;

I seen ya’ for deceiver,

So many years ago.

But I choose’d to keep me vows to you,

‘Til heaven takes me in;

An’ if I granted sim’lar choice,

I’d choose the same a’gin’.

I’m dying love, I feel it now,

Me spirit needs to leave;

This body sez it’s had enough,

Me time is done, indeed.”

 

“Lay down, me lass, breath peace,

Lay down ‘n be there, still;

Our fate, as love, ‘pears destiny,

As both our lungs were filled.”

 

Mary Dunn surrendered then,

To callings of her spirit;

With forever longing arms of his,

She had no cause to fear it.

United once again, at last,

Of faith and love of few,

She crossed into Eternity,

With her love, Bartholomew!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

the flow of this piece is impeccable. The story that is told is one of a deep love. This doesn't read like a poem but more like a story and that shows the talent in your flow and rhythm. It is a sad twisted tale but in the end they both loved each other for all eternity. Simply stunning and amazing. This reminds me of an old world write that you don't see much of these days.

[Michael Jarrell]

Woah. Awesome! Are you inspired by Poe? This kind of reminds me of him. He's my fav :D

[Crowley]

This is a staggering piece of work in scope and ambition. The writing was fabulous, the accent and the flow lent to a great pace. The length and quality of the story was refreshing. I have to say, this is the first I have read of you and I will be back...don't be scared...but I will be back.

[Angela Mulley]

This is a beautiful piece, so very well written and going into my library! :)

[Dizzy]

Okay I admit it I didn't want to read it because of the length.... but I am so glad that I did. It is such a wonderful poem/story. My Favorite was the ending but that is probably expected, but I also loved how he lied to her about the other males. I couldn't find anything wrong with it.

[SpokenWord]

I love how this reads, it reminds me of Ireland or some place like that. I had to read it slower than most writes but it was well worth the effort. I don't if I was Mary I would be a little pissy about the deceit he told her. Im not sure if I could hang out with a ghost forsaken real life for so many years either but I guess this love stories crosses all barriers.

The thing about this poem is the true love under all the deceit, death and loneliness. How powerful is love where a living person can keep love across the vast darkness of death. So many today leave their marriage and both parties are still living, how faithful is Mary to hang in there beyond the grave.

In the end they get to live in the here after together such a fitting ending to this love story but the sad part of it, she never had any children to bounce off her knee.

Excellent write~

[Hollow Man]

Beautiful. Not much else need be said. Beautiful story and very well written.

kgs

[Geralyn Miller]

Beautiful story, exquisitely told. You used just a touch of vernacular and did not let it get in the way of the natural flow of the words. Your word selection helps carry the story along at a quick pace. While this work is lengthy, it reads quickly because of the flow and the story.
Your poem brings to mind an old Irish song, the chorus of which is: "Never marry a sailin' man, a sailors wife don't be. A sailor loves you fair full well, but more he loves the sea."

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Verily I say to thee well done!

[Ice QueenJen]

This is like a poem of the old times, sad yet loving that she would stay and visit his grave everyday until she was taken away too.
Great poem Fegger!

[Lindsey]

This is unique. It is a cool story and I like how they speak in a specific way. I think the way the writing show's how they feel is good and that is verry important.