SOS

shifting ground
tumbling down
spiraling, spiraling
whirling around
one step forward
two steps back
feel like i'm having
a heart attack
the end of this road
seems a long way off
roadblocks impede
as onlookers scoff
take my hand
and pull me out
let me breathe
remove my doubt
allow me to feel
your warmth and light
love me fully
and hold me tight
keep me steady
on this rocky road
build me up and
never let me fold

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think the chaos of life leads to many deaths... I know I felt the way you expressed it in your poem many times.