The Luminous Man

The Luminous Man

A Poem by Bad bunny

The Luminous Man

 

Just a speck of illumination

Counteracts anguishes lacerations

Spoke In dilated rumination

 The loss of light in his elevation

No fight or flight to consternation

In a small steel box de-escalation

No light little sound, no sense of ground

Push of panic button, no alarm sounds

No sense of time, minutes turn profound

Captured specters in a vault unsound

Sliding downward to a burial mound

He spout of scars, did not ask expound

He carries torches an array display

Cache ablazes to allay dismay


© 2019 Bad bunny



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I am hearing that old hymn .."Let it Shine"...
this little light of mine ..or something like that... odd what we remember
when cornered by age..
When in VEGAS I was on an elevator, the lights went out, I was the only American
there.. a group of Asian men gasp something in their native tongue, and I said "Oh
no".., at the same time.. then we all laughed together.. and the light came back on.. and I learned how dear LIGHT truly is.. to each and everyone that BE..

You are quite the POET !!!!

Jazzy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Month Ago

Thanks Jazzy I believe the Oh s**t expression is truly an international language LOL :)
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Month Ago

HA.... RIGHT.............. You are welcome BB



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Your poem begins & ends with a spark of light . . . the middle conveys the huge amount of confusion and/or darkness that must be overcome by these little shards of light. Sometimes it can seem insurmountable, as your poem seems to suggest at some points. But in the end, we can only let that light shine, no matter how tiny it may seem, becuz it's amazing how light can be multiplied if we are all giving just a little more than we thought we could (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

He is forever now, called by me, the luminous man not just because he is obsessed with flashlights b.. read more
A little bit of light thrown into complete darkness is a welcome friend. That's where your lines took me this Easter Sunday morning Bunny. Today you are Easter Bunny as well as Grandad Bunny because I can't think of you as a Bad Bunny. Illumination is everything. Floundering in darkness is terrifying.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Month Ago

I'm a mostly good bad bunny:)
Next time let's take the stairs, it's better on the nerves and good for the cardio:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Month Ago

He carries flashlights everywhere I took that to be a sad thing, but the truth is upon reflection..... read more
I am hearing that old hymn .."Let it Shine"...
this little light of mine ..or something like that... odd what we remember
when cornered by age..
When in VEGAS I was on an elevator, the lights went out, I was the only American
there.. a group of Asian men gasp something in their native tongue, and I said "Oh
no".., at the same time.. then we all laughed together.. and the light came back on.. and I learned how dear LIGHT truly is.. to each and everyone that BE..

You are quite the POET !!!!

Jazzy

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Month Ago

Thanks Jazzy I believe the Oh s**t expression is truly an international language LOL :)
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Month Ago

HA.... RIGHT.............. You are welcome BB
He sure can put on a luminous show like Tesla did at the world's fair in Chicago in his days. Luminousity can dispell animosity. You are shedding your light on this site Bad Bunny.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

All wonderful. You should write ashort story about it with some drama. Up to you...
Bad bunny

1 Month Ago

I lack the skills to write in story form thus far perhaps later
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Trial and error. Rise and fall. Live and learn. See and behold. Rise up and achieve. Be tested and t.. read more
The dark room of a lifetime...I wonder what the exposures show...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Month Ago

I can not even begin to express just how brilliant this review is to me

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Added on April 17, 2019
Last Updated on April 17, 2019
Tags: trapped, elevator, fear, pain, injury, light, sensory deprivation

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Bad bunny
Bad bunny

pittsburgh, PA



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