Aristarchracy

Aristarchracy

A Poem by Bad bunny

Aristarchracy

In the

Hush hallowed halls

Sings shallow scrawls

Of the critic

 

Heart of

Crush capture clutch

Bleak barren brush

Of the experts

 

Revile

Drink, defile dash

Creaks censors crash

Of an artist

 

Lies

Framed forming fact

Claim concepts casts

To your echo

 

The death

Masks meanings marks

Steals sketches sparks

For the masses

 

Of beauty

Bask blazings blooms

Chars censures cruel

Into ashes



© 2019 Bad bunny


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I have to confess, before reading, I had to just peruse the way you laid out these verses, the way you use bold & alliteration, etc. Being a structured poet by nature, I'm drawn to your unusual patterns of sound & possibilities. Like reading all the bolded text in one string, checking out this possible avenue of hidden significance. OK, now I can read the poem. I think you're talking about the poetry police who can crush a poet's spirit with a heavy-handed review. I wonder if you spend alot of time choosing the strings of words with alliteration? It seems like you've done this with great consideration (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

holy smokes you got it at first glance... In The Heart Of Revile Lies The Death Of Beauty! Keen eyes.. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

You have such a keen eye . . . I'm in awe!
Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

I knew you would like that:)



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This is like a pomegranate; looks as one whole beautiful poem, but when you open it .... within in so many moieties, snugglesd tight forming this spectacular aggregate.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Days Ago

spectacular aggregate.... now Mrudula that is a poem:) love those eyes
Mrudula Rani

2 Days Ago

I loved the format, it is absolutely mesmerizing. And inspiring!
Giving the true review with compassion is same art like write great poems. But also accepting of harsh reviews is great art too. I get several times quiet harsh reviews but they actually pointed out on my mistakes. I think we should hear what review actually saying.


For example at my case . My poems have quiet lot grammar issues . At past i wrote too long and monotematic . So when someone pointed out even in bad manner and aim. Actually that person help me more then so called friend. Who just told me how great my poems are. Without true reflection we cannot make real writing.


At past i gave true honest revoews to some people here . But they don't even bother to reply back . They simply block me. Which i find childish but they 's way.


I think it will be great if people will talk more open about issues on this site .

Great you make this one poem. Cause we all need to comunnicate with each other with honest and friendly way.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

I never mind a true review please...do
Bunny,
A poem within a poem . . . very clever!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Hey thanks Kentuck and thanks for the read
I think we are often our own worse critics dear Bunny, and i know to begin with i was paranoid that other poets might put me down .... then i realized that the put.downers were not poets at all , just wanna be's.
Anyway, i go my own sweet way now, and if i can't leave a good review then i don't review at all ...

I do love alliteration by the way ... one of my favourite poetic foods :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

I too don't review if i don't see something of merit. I will only send any form of critique if it is.. read more
Stella Armour

1 Week Ago

Always welcome dear Bunny :)
' .. .. Lies - Framed forming fact - Claim concepts casts - To your echo .. '

Had to force myself not, not, NOT to glance at Margie's review because she's one of the best reviewers in the cafe! So, will you take my word that I stopped at * '.. just to peruse'!

Need say that having immediately noticed the form of your poem, the sub titling creating a logical stream rather like an umbrella, protecting those words beneath. Is as if you're needing to shout out your feelings and opinions about the way people read, negate or favour each other's creativity, saying what they think needs saying. That word CARE and its teeny addenda in the graphic seems to vie with that stream, OR is it vice versa? You've set a puzzle here, enjoyable, intriguing.. indefinite, perhaps. ( * Having set my words, I then read Margie's!) _

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

She is indeed Emma, as you are too. The aristarch-racy is real prevalent these days in so many forum.. read more
emmajoy

1 Week Ago

Not usually so fierce but over the years in here, have seen, felt, heard so much. Now at the stage .. read more
Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

I would not in a million years question that heart of yours Emma! I feel it like its right next to m.. read more
Maybe it was Emerson’s influence, his message in Self Reliance, that convinced me to follow my own drumbeat and not allow critics to crush my creativity or spirit. As you convey here, the critics are usually shallow, in talent and confidence, and they try to project their misery on us. I usually know when my creativity has fallen short. I don’t need others to tell me. You’ve reinforced it here. Excellent piece.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Wow thanks very much appreciated. I agree completely I think my rub in this context is that we as ar.. read more
well here is what i see...i am reminded of William Forrester saying "the best time is when we write something and we look at it for the first time, ourselves, before anybody else has a chance to start knocking it down"
yep----

i don't think my writing is very good, but i will feel much better about it if i knock yours down....
too bad there are several out there whose creed is this.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

The picture was my first inspiration then this this critic fellow came along and kinda made this all.. read more
Beware of the critic that kills the artist in us. Keep them at bay once you recognise them. Great word choice used to convey the crash of confidence, the defiling and death. Very palpable emotions and so relatable.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

After some intercourses with a curmudgeon on this site it suddenly hit me how easy it is to criticiz.. read more
DIVYA

1 Week Ago

I kind of have an idea about curmudgeons you’re referring to bunny. Some of them are good plagiari.. read more
Very clever methinks.. Poemed to near perfection and now without a doubt, one of my favourwrites... Pity poor us eh'...... N

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Favourwrites is now one of my favorite words!!!!!!
Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

fank you.. I should fink so ......
I have to confess, before reading, I had to just peruse the way you laid out these verses, the way you use bold & alliteration, etc. Being a structured poet by nature, I'm drawn to your unusual patterns of sound & possibilities. Like reading all the bolded text in one string, checking out this possible avenue of hidden significance. OK, now I can read the poem. I think you're talking about the poetry police who can crush a poet's spirit with a heavy-handed review. I wonder if you spend alot of time choosing the strings of words with alliteration? It seems like you've done this with great consideration (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

holy smokes you got it at first glance... In The Heart Of Revile Lies The Death Of Beauty! Keen eyes.. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

You have such a keen eye . . . I'm in awe!
Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

I knew you would like that:)

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Tags: critic, art, cowardice, creation, experts, shallow, censor, censure, concept, beauty, understanding, thought, personal

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