Memory

Memory

A Poem by Bad bunny

Memory


Bechance we meet anon

On some dusty shelf

Try to look kindly

 

Ghost dance souls weep alone

Yon shunned musty shells

Wandering blindly

 

Askance views glow atone

Pon stunned lusty selves

Pondering finely

 

Perchance you grow unknown

Embrace trusty knell

Treasure its finery

 

Sundance sings song, so sown

To Grace gushing swell

Pleasure divinely  


© 2019 Bad bunny



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Bad bunny
Not sure if it is done

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alone.. atone.. .. knell.. swell.. .. finery .. divinely

' Askance views glow - Pon stunned lusty selves - Pondering finely ' those lines really do prompt some thought.

Oh you Cleverness you! Your meter must have taken time, surely - else geniu shas swept you up and given you something special. Each three lines from start to finish have near enough perfect rhyme; even more - each trio of phrases creates thought to ponder on. For me this is creative writing very definitely done!

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

meditations meandering meanings making my memory marquee :)
You inspire me with your words of.. read more
emmajoy

4 Days Ago

Smiling now, thank you. Your parenthesised words say so much!



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Your tercets regarding recollections are replete with tender regard, Bunny. Each stanza skillfully scripted,It is hard not to pick favorites among the staves! The first stanza grabs heart. And my preference is:
Perchance you grow unknown
Embrace trusty Knell
Treasure it's finery. An alleviating prescribe.

Posted 8 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

9 Minutes Ago

when you are forced into a situation (M.B.D.) when recall can be a perplexing...to adapt, adept you .. read more
I find this quite a challenge as I look to interpret the meaning behind these finely scripted lines with flow and rhyme. Perhaps recalling a time when more awakened and ready for a 'call to arms'?

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Day Ago

Thanks John you’re eyes see much of it good sir and in truth a poem is all about what you see and .. read more
Your voice comes through so strongly here Bunny, with your fine choice of language, great rhythm and rhyme. I have always had a penchant for rhyme and meter so it is good to read you. You have a style and sound of your own. Could pick it out anywhere and know it's the Bunny.

Chris

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Days Ago

I could hug you for saying that! because I have referred to you as the rhythm and rhyme queen in the.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Days Ago

You are an established voice. There are other poets here who also have that strong voice. I would be.. read more
Your words flow in perfect harmony and rhythm in this elegant poem bunny. To me they speak of the many nuances of love and how we find and lose ourselves in it. There’s a very poetic ring to your words that catches me and my favourites are the first two verses. This to me is an outstanding poem !

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Days Ago

our chatter in one of my reviews of one your poems made me think of this write Divvy twas inspired b.. read more
DIVYA

2 Days Ago

I’m happy a poem of mine inspired such memorable poetry. It was a pleasure to read and review. You.. read more
We all have at least one thing in common, our love of words, both written and spoken.. styles may vary, and considerably so, but quality my fine furry friend is always evident and will invariably shine through..

Here is a fine example of a collection of words cleverly crafted, and with a glow of their own... In my opinion tis done and dusted..... N

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Days Ago

Thanks Nev, slowly getting there... still don't think i'm good enough to publish yet however me thin.. read more
Neville Pettitt

2 Days Ago

the bunny has already come a long way.. and I reckon you may well be right about sharing certain oth.. read more
Use of language par excellance. You know I've found there are two things that go when you get to my age. The first is your memory and I can't remember what the second thing is.
In this poem you draw a wonderful poignant, clever and rythmic picture. Perfect meter it almost sways along with the pictures now in my mind.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

3 Days Ago

This is how bad my memory is... I can not recite a single thing i write! When I sing i have to tape.. read more
Perfection indeed... lovely. .long lasting in memory..
My vote be FINI... ♥..

A pondering I shall go .. being touched by your genius

Jazzy

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

Thanks jazzy seems my voice is evolving a bit different since I started here thanks for the billow a.. read more
J. J.  Nightingale

4 Days Ago

YOU ARE WELCOME..........♥................
Methinks, dear Bunny, that thou hast penned as finely tuned bit of writing as has ever had quill put to parchment. Let us treasure the gifts we have...share some and keep others close to the heart.

A right good write is this gathering of words.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

Thanks good sir thou dost flatter this wretched rodent:) I guess that clinches it me no change this .. read more
dear Bad... the wisdom of the ageless... like a diamond that
never loses its sparkle. Perchance we should meet on a dusty shelf...
you would be a "page turner". The setting sun is a reminder that
we may not wake to see the Sun rise on yonder Hill... as we will be over the Hill
and in green pastures of heavens lore. We will enjoy the Finery of a new borne day.
Lovely poetry with feathered feelings. truly, Pat

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

Oh my I’m speechless at your delightful response :) I think perhaps it is in fact finished to elic.. read more
alone.. atone.. .. knell.. swell.. .. finery .. divinely

' Askance views glow - Pon stunned lusty selves - Pondering finely ' those lines really do prompt some thought.

Oh you Cleverness you! Your meter must have taken time, surely - else geniu shas swept you up and given you something special. Each three lines from start to finish have near enough perfect rhyme; even more - each trio of phrases creates thought to ponder on. For me this is creative writing very definitely done!

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

meditations meandering meanings making my memory marquee :)
You inspire me with your words of.. read more
emmajoy

4 Days Ago

Smiling now, thank you. Your parenthesised words say so much!

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Added on May 16, 2019
Last Updated on May 16, 2019
Tags: Memory, love, self, evocation, muse

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Bad bunny
Bad bunny

pittsburgh, PA



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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antiques store and it is a vegetarian restaurant.. more..

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