Expressions

Expressions

A Poem by Bad bunny

__Expressions__

 

If you were, to inquire

Pon musings, of the fire

Inflections, to the flames

Resilience, forming frames

Resonance, of the choirs

Proclaim pop, cracking spires

Aesthetic, claim inspires

Witness and, Consummate

Wordsmith to, inquirer sate

Coalesce... propagate



© 2019 Bad bunny


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I can really see that you are a pecussionist in this one my friend. I find myself tapping it out on my keyboard as I read.
There are other layers to this as well in my opinion. The words create a chant like feel which takes me into an almost shamanic feeling. Then there is the dreams we feel with all our senses in the fire itself.
Old thinking and I mean that in the best possible way.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

I had jotted the line in a jog of thought flow... consummation of representation (artist) and witnes.. read more



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Really creative
Is this the internal workings of a writer's mind lol ;)

Interesting !

Posted 14 Hours Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

11 Hours Ago

hi soul:) nice to meet you I was wondering if you existed...
In truth the internal workings .. read more
Lingering Soul

11 Hours Ago

lol
You are funny
I do exist
Not being a fan of commas, I have to say, I would remove them. I feel your poem reads with the same crisp staccato even if commas are not there. This aspect of reading doesn't need to be guided, it just happens becuz of your word choices. Another thing about your word choices, the rhythmic intensity feels percussive, as Ken mentions, but the toe-tapping musicality resembles how a crackling fire might sound & feel with throbbing heat! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Day Ago


Bad bunny

1 Day Ago

I wrestle with punctuation constantly I’m always afraid my infer will be blurred:)
quite interesting dear Bunny, from You I do expect that You would turn something like "fire" into something "poetically" amusing like this, even in our dangerous states and hard times, if we dared to look more deeper and more in awareness, we will be inspired and something will be written down, fire can hold negative and positive meanings, we can yield the situation to what we like it to be, and we can do that through expressing and writing, maybe that's never what Your intentions was but this is what my mind got reading Your words :)

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

3 Days Ago

Light you so, see me
Reading this makes me feel like I'm doing something I've always wanted to try, but have been too shy to - fire dancing. I can perfectly visualize a staff of flames, completely unpredictable and yet tamed by hand, surrounding me in its warmth and dangerous gaze. I can feel my bare feet touching a cold and damp pier, a small drizzle of rain beginning to push its way down to the earth as I move, and despite the cold and breathless air, I feel empowered and completely in harmony with everything that is supposed to extinguish the flame. Beautiful work - thank you for the empowering daydream. :)

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

wow Chrysantheranium I love love what comes out of your cranium! what you see in this is more beauti.. read more
Your words capture the near hypnotic nature of a fire. We can sit and watch the flames dance, the green and dead wood hiss and pop, and often find ourselves lost in a past moment. Well said, sir.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

4 Days Ago

thanks Mr. Ray I love to do that very same thing on a chilly evening a campfire is the best channel .. read more
You have drawn a spectacular picture of one of the spiritual elements of nature; fire is cathartic and pestiferous! Your description of flame's mystical dance is mesmerizing, Robert. The inflamed crimsons and gold have a consuming effect on the spectator!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

You are a jewel Mrudula, I love how you play with words and meanings. I am on that wave of elements .. read more
Mrudula Rani

1 Week Ago

Please do be careful, when in the awesome presence of the force of nature. Some times we forget how.. read more
I see fire meaning many things from warmth to anger to disappointment to an end. Like a transport medium of emotions.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Andrew i believe your response was a poem:) You know, now that you mention it... fire is a very hard.. read more
andrew mitchell

1 Week Ago

Lol being an ex smoker , it’s all about that fix no matter what lighter is used! HAha!
Bunny, I equate this piece not so much to the little bonfire you picture here, but to the flames that claimed Notre Dame. Maybe it was just the words used...choirs...spires...witness...and maybe that wasn't the intent, but that is where this took me.

A very good write, my friend.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

That is very interesting what you see and now so can I :) the root of cathedral is from the Latin wo.. read more
Ahhh,
Another virtual diamond in the rough!
Filled with meaningful metaphor, emotion, and deep feeling, succinctly expressed in a lively dose of catchy mono-rhymes … all an original poem and form needs to make its own song sing and dance.
With such a bright, red-hot rhythm and beat, here is no doubt you've the heart and touch a true drummer with a poet's pen.

Beautiful rhythmic beat,
a treat rocking in my seat,
steady tapping of lively feet,
music evermore will be complete!

I love it, My Fine Friend! ~ Richard 🍃

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Thank you good sir I find that muses do come in many forms we just need the right eye squint to see .. read more
The fire is alive within the emtions that are express

Good content

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Thanks diabolic:) it was sparked by a work of art and a painting

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Added on June 1, 2019
Last Updated on June 5, 2019
Tags: Fire, flame, inspire, expression, interpretation, muse, reader, witness, consummation, artistry

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Bad bunny

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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antiques store and it is a vegetarian restaurant.. more..

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