Torrent-tial

Torrent-tial

A Poem by Bad bunny

__Torrent-tial__

 

All that I would cede

Pleading refrain

Screams of pain

Eyes bleed

Keen

Skies bead

Abash stains

Cannot constrain

Wretched sight this deed

Weeps sorrows rain

Wash remains

Esteem

clean



© 2019 Bad bunny


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In spite of thinking and thinking over your uniquely styled and worded poem, am sadly unsure of its intended meaning. However, can only only tell you what I feel, think: I see it as an intended apology for something done. The aftermath of a terrible mistake, regretted but hoping for forgiveness. If horribly wrong, I'm the one now apologising!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

kk I love what you see by the way the format was an attempt to express that feeling when just one wo.. read more
Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

the picture is my face turned sideways looking down from the sky turning to rain
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

Re. your penultimate comment, i really should try to use just one word more often!!!

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I felt inner turmoil here. A torrent of it. Sometimes after I have had a good cry, I feel refreshed, cleansed even. It:s like removing the cork from a bottle of fizzy drink after it has been shaken. You get an explosive reaction followed by calm. That's what you gave me here dear Bunny, with your words this morning. Have a lovely day.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

1 Week Ago

Hey hey Chris:) so true I have in many ways learned to calm the sadness but the triggers still linge.. read more

I interpret this to mean an inner storm that must hit with all its force to (hopefully) cleanse bad feelings or memories. Storms leave damage but offer an opportunity to rebuild.
Just sharing my interpretation of this piece. I could be way off. :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

Not at all! I never know if I should explain the motivation of a poem or just let it lie? But you ce.. read more
Edie Blue Starfish

2 Weeks Ago

Sometimes best to let it lie and let others see what they will. But totally up to you. :)
You do love to play with words, don't you? Not sure what this poem is all about, but the shape of it seems to be the shape of a woman...which leads me to believe it is about a woman. She is crying and somehow that cleanses her soul. You try to get her to stop...perhaps you are the reason she is crying to begin with? Not really sure, but I must say you certainly post thought provoking work and it is unique...which makes me enjoy it. Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Aha, now it makes more sense. Thanks for the explanation! Have a great weekend.
Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

It is strange she has been out of my life for quite a long time but it still lingers like it was yes.. read more
Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Not strange at all. Many of my poems are inspired by long ago relationships,
In spite of thinking and thinking over your uniquely styled and worded poem, am sadly unsure of its intended meaning. However, can only only tell you what I feel, think: I see it as an intended apology for something done. The aftermath of a terrible mistake, regretted but hoping for forgiveness. If horribly wrong, I'm the one now apologising!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

kk I love what you see by the way the format was an attempt to express that feeling when just one wo.. read more
Bad bunny

2 Weeks Ago

the picture is my face turned sideways looking down from the sky turning to rain
emmajoy

2 Weeks Ago

Re. your penultimate comment, i really should try to use just one word more often!!!

.. read more

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Added on June 6, 2019
Last Updated on June 6, 2019
Tags: sorrow, bleeding, keening, pain, grace, survival, shame, seduction, molestation, rape

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Bad bunny
Bad bunny

pittsburgh, PA



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