Choice

A short write

Truth is found in silence.
Love is found in pain.
Trust is found in forgiveness.
Your friend, by choice, I remain.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

So simple, yet it has all the power of a magic spell, whispered from one friend to another.
Well played. ^^

[FlamingPhoenix]

Yes, a magic spell--I like that :-)

[Bluefire]

^^ Me too!

[OrangeSlice]

Simple truths :) I love it short & sweet

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you most kindly!

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Woo Woo Woo.
Now you're up there with the greats my friend.
I think you have distilled a relationship to 4 simple truths.
REALLY well done.

[FlamingPhoenix]

You are so kind! Thanks :-)

[Madalyn Beck]

You've said a lot in a few lines. Very expressive, honest, and true. It's always by choice! (:

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you :-)

[s y e]

I cannot put in to words how much I love this. Going in my favourites -- You've left me speechless!

[FlamingPhoenix]

I doubt if I have ever expressed more sincere words than these. I cannot even begin to tell you how grateful I am that this piece has been well-received on here.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I was skipping along... all of the sudden.... I tripped over this spectacular poem:)

[melissa]

Awesome poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[Lyn Anderson]

A lot said in a tight space. Sometimes these pieces say it louder than any lengthy piece could.

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love your voice. It's clear and strong. Great Haiku? Awesome write, Phoenix. And I don't usually like Haikus. Very nice.

[FlamingPhoenix]

In the traditional sense, a haiku has 3 lines, 17 syllables (5/7/5)--which might be why you like this piece--but I could turn it into one:
Love is found in pain.
Trust is found in forgiveness.
Your friend, I remain.

[Bright Ocean Star]

No...I like it better the other way. Thank you for sharing it with us.....:)

[A. Amos]

Sure you will my friend and this is a stylish statement of being friends, impressive...