Choking: A Limerick

Choking: A Limerick

A Poem by Kira

There once was a man from New York

About to eat a dinner of pork

He sipped at his wine--

Choked exactly at nine--

And was buried beneath the wine's cork.

 

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Winner

Apr 27, 2009

© 2011 Kira


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Titter! Titter! Titter!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Flows very nicely. Great read. I read it aloud to my friend, and she started laughing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


abso hilar, loved the sharp format.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is wonderful.
You have talent.
It's a wonderful Limerick.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Congratulations on winning the limerick contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Grisly, but the limmerick style makes it quite humorous. Good job, I personally suck at formatted poetry.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 25, 2009
Last Updated on March 24, 2011

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