Die Inside (Lyrics)

For Patrick. The first lines were texted into my phone for later...

You're talking with your friends and you ignore me in the hall,
Sometimes boy I wonder, did you ever like me at all?
I used to think I could guard my heart, make it a place to hide
But every time I see your face I...
Die inside

You've IM'd me 7 times, and you closed out every one
I hate to have you tease me; if it's done, just say it's done
Now when I'm walking in the rain wondering who to call for a ride,
I remember you're ignoring me and I...
Die inside

Were you just poking fun, was I the lonely one?
Did you think saying you love me would be a BIG-LAUGH-I-WON'T-CARE
You used me to get to her, you'll never know how much it hurt
Because I need you now, I need you like air

You give me a gentle smile, like you're thinking it's enough
With one apology you run from me, well boy you ain't so tough
You don't know, you can't know 'bout those slit wrists the night I tried
Locking it inside my head is not enough, to just...
Die inside

Were you just poking fun, was I the lonely one?
Did you think saying you love me would be a BIG-LAUGH-I-WON'T-CARE
You used me to get to her, you'll never know how much it hurt
Because I need you now, I need you like air
And now I know that when you say you love me...meaning it is rare

Were you just poking fun, was I the lonely one?
Did you think saying you love me would be a BIG-LAUGH-I-WON'T-CARE
You used me to get to her, you'll never know how much it hurt
Because I need you now, I need you like air

 

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Honorable Mention

Jun 23, 2010

• Intense Rhyming Poems
• Die Inside (Lyrics)

Third

Jul 20, 2010

• Lyrical
• Die Inside (Lyrics)

 

Author's Note

I honestly don't know how it happened...

Reviews

[Jenthura]

Seeing as how it came from real feelings, i really don't want to critique and make it hurt more, but I can say that it was a great piece. First-hand experience gave you quite an edge in this piece. I'd say forget him, but you should crotch-kick him before that. ^^