Josh

Thoughts are dragging, heavy, lumbering

And they just won't go,

Namely when I'm sound and slumbering

Lingering, you know.

 

(Your blush is simply tangible

Your thoughts are all too clear

You may want my body

But your heart just isn't here)

 

I hope you'll notice my slow death soon

Before I waste away

Or at least make me regret the wasting

Of many a day

 

But if you see my hidden heart,

While your comfort feels safe and warm:

I just want your embrace, not your body or face

Don't kiss me, just weather my storm.

 

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Speechless

Apr 6, 2011

• Love and Heartbreak
• Josh

 

Reviews

[compositionc]

Sweet.

[Khaaki]

so passionate... i loved d last line "Don't kiss me, just weather my storm" in particular... a nice poem overall...

[Kitten]

It makes me want to cry and throw a fit of rage through an abandoned parking lot. i love it. It's fantastic and I love the flow and rhyme scheme.

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

It's great very passionate and deep, it has taste to it with the using of nature and pain. Great writing.