More than 7 sins

this is a test...about how I am insane, or just found what im actually into

 Those sins and mistakes

that got people on stakes

The greed, the lust

Behind dark wooden doors they are always shut

between men, women,kids and old

Oh how many times we were told

but one more sin was never mentioned and never a human was to hold

that unknown is and will always be an untold

The mix of love,lust,greed and vainty

This thing that could cause insanity

That deadly feeling

That suicidal thought

Oh how I love the rush it brought

Oh there is more than seven sins, my friend

And believe me, that thing wont be told, until the end

 

Author's Note

very rished but very.....I dont know, you tell me

Reviews

[Dominic Rosales]

very..whats the word.... could be emotional, or pusuasive, or even true. I don't really know but great poem, I enjoyed it, and the type of poem is uncommon to see from people on here, so you kind of tackled it with a really hard hit and did very well. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.