Two simple lines of thought

Two simple lines of thought

A Poem by Flo
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contest

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 As you stand on the edge of the cliff, thinking of how much s**t you'd done in your life

You'll probably see how you'll make other's feel more s**t because of your lose, so think before you act.

© 2009 Flo


Author's Note

Flo
ignore typos, just for a contest :P

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Short, but still very sweet. And exactly my opinion on the topic at hand too. Good stuff there!

Good luck in whichever contest it is you entered this into. I'm still new so wouldn't have the slightest clue. Good writing, as per usual. Keep it coming (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


I sincerely enjoyed the scope of depth and thought, the mainframe of insight desribing what it means to
see life in all its importance, the two lines play off of eachother, a pleasure to read, you have talent

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

They compliment each other very well. I like these two lines along with everyone elses two lines. Good job on this one, definitely worth writing. Even if it is just for a contest.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 8, 2009
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Flo
Flo

city of randomness and insanity :3



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