Streetlight Romance

Streetlight Romance

A Poem by Alisa_the_fluff_ball
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This poem is about the struggle that LGBT couples go through everyday to be together. This is something I feel very strongly about, so I decided to write about it.

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There was a girl,

 

Out of control

Black eyeliner

Pierced tongue

Always alone

 

Who loved a girl.

 

Straight laced

Long hair

Cross necklace

Perfect boyfriend

 

They were never supposed to be.

 

He left

She cried

Fell into

Her arms

 

But they were.

 

Lips

Colliding

Hearts

Racing

 

Everyone looked upon them with disdain.

 

Thrown out

On the street

Disowned

On their own

 

They never knew love could be so hard.

 

Attacked

Threatened

Fear

Agony

 

Leaving each other was no option.

 

Making love

Moonlight in her hair

Kissing the sorrow

Need her to stay

 

This streetlight romance continues today.

 

Who will break the silence?


© 2009 Alisa_the_fluff_ball



Author's Note

Alisa_the_fluff_ball
I respect your views, so please respect mine. :)

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Very strong and emotional poem, and a good one at that. I felt that the way you played with the words, the way you carried the poem out [the format] added emphasis to the overall poem and kept the reader actually reading. The whole story line was good and meaningful too. I loved this poem alot. Keep it up! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Very strong and emotional poem, and a good one at that. I felt that the way you played with the words, the way you carried the poem out [the format] added emphasis to the overall poem and kept the reader actually reading. The whole story line was good and meaningful too. I loved this poem alot. Keep it up! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amazing, my love.
You certainly have a way with words.

I love how raw, and there.

This not only applies to LGBT couples, but others as well.
I love this a lot, its one of my favorites of yours babe.

Love love love you!
Alex



Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like it, although im kind of a feminist in hiding, but the way the words were organized was really good. A lot of though and its not just writing "oh whatever" It has a message and i like it. Good Job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2009
Last Updated on December 28, 2009
Tags: Gay, Lesbian, Love, Romance, Streetlight Romance

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Alisa_the_fluff_ball
Alisa_the_fluff_ball

Ow. My life. It hurts.



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Hello all! My name is Alisa. I live to sing and to write. I am bisexual, if you have a problem with that, then please save us all the trouble and navigate away from this page. My style changes daily, .. more..

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