2:07am

Loving someone deeply while being with another.

I miss you,

But you'll never know.

Instead I'll wrap myself

In his kisses,

And blush

As my heart races

At his words.

You're still my everything,

And I'll never know

What I am to you.

At least

I can be

His nothing,

And know it.

You have me over Break,

And all the days between.

He's got his arms

Around me,

While your lips

Press against my soul.

Its 2:07,

And baby

I'm in heaven.

Author's Note

The title came from the fact it was 2:07am when I finished this. I tried to do something different with the line breaks, let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Sincerely, Alex]

HOLY FREAKING FLIP-FLOPS!!!

....

-goes to cut arm off due to being your tiny suitcase next to you being my suitcase-

Yes. You are my suitcase. That is how epic this is.
I LOVE THE TITLE AND THE ENDING!!
(it has a seven in it, so that makes me even more happy.)
I think you painted the clearest picture.

[Summerangel1]

The tone of this writing is one I am currently drifting to and from with my writing at the moment. You've given me inspiration (don't worry I wont steal). A beautiful piece of writing.

[PaperHearts]

Amazing write! I loved the line breaks in this piece, and thought that it worked really effectively in creating the perfect pace for a poem. From the second I read the title of this piece, I was immediately drawn in, and the rest of the poem certainly didn't disappoint. There was a real sense of desperation and conflict in this piece that I could relate to, and I thought that you expressed that beautifully. Absolutely loved the last line! :)
~PaperHearts

[Anicca]

A lovely and deeply emotional piece that allows the reader to know exactly how you feel even though we dont know the full story. 'While your lips press against my soul' - genius. Thanks for sharing.

[Justina]

i agree, the ending is outstanding! i absolutley love the "while your lips press against my soul"
amazing poetry.

[Lexi Nicole]

Very nicely done, I love the ending and the whole flow of the whole piece. You really feel the pull of the speakers heart between these two different people. Great work! :)

[Liz-z]

"I'm in heaven."
LOVED THE WAY IT ENDED and loved how it was (sort of) a random time! Pretty amazing! :D

"He's got his arms

Around me,

While your lips

Press against my soul.

Its 2:07,

And baby

I'm in heaven."
Just had to re-post it, I'm in love with those lines! lol
Fantastic job!!! X)

[Lunar Lightning]

Wow... in all honesty the picture says as much as the poem, which is amazing because that's what gave me the idea of what the poem was about in the first place. Absolutely amazing if you ask me, I can's believe how much I can relate to this, it's freaky. Great job.

Luna