Razorblade

Realization.
Runs through my veins.
Anxiety.
At its best... and worst.
Zen.
Zoned in on that feeling.
Oblivious.
Only to the harm.
Relaxation.
Reaches my insides.
Breathe.
Breathe, breathe, breathe.
Listen.
Lightly to my conscience.
Aware.
Affirmative it will be done again.
Debilitated.
Darkness surrounds as my eyes slipped closed.
Elation.
Embedded within, now that I feel.

Reviews

Morbidly beautiful. I love it.

[Blossom]

really liked this. like your writing style

[Ryan Prudnick]

Repeated this in my head. Good poem that relaxed my mind.

[al25]

I really like your style in writing poetry. Great job. Again enjoyed reading this.

[dreamer :)]

This is perfect! Don't change a thing!!!

[Crusaderscross]

Cool poem. Just my kind of writing, simple to the point and very In your face
Thanks. Will keep reading you.

Thanks for your review of my poem. Glad you liked it

[Patricia(:]

This was a very interesting poem. I liked it, it was deep.
I really like the way you wrote it, it was interesting. This poem as all your other works, was amazing(: