Butterfly Wings

Butterfly Wings

A Poem by paradise

Butterfly Wings

such pretty things

down to the gallows

a young girl sinds

 

Sweet Melodies

from ruby red lips

painting a picture

much prettier

than this

 

Glitter Elixar

with firefly lights

take me home

she tried to fight

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
hmm I made this from writing ina note "Ruby Red Lips." small things make a bigger picture

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sinds are apoint of view, fire fireflies rule the night, butterflies ride the wind ,roads taken

Posted 3 Years Ago


Mmmmm butterfly wings pinned to a wall

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really like the structure and how it rolls off the tongue when you say it aloud. kudos, I very much enjoyed the read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very nice poem :]

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this. It's simple, yet beautiful:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautifully written! I found the piece delicate and thoughtful... not sure what that means to you, but that is what I felt after reading it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


love this :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


The sugar is melting. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


very sweet and thoughtful... loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


i'm lost...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on December 16, 2011
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