Freedom Flies

Caged bird

               behing bars

                               is dying to be free

it's wings

            they fly far

 

fly free

                    spread your wings

                  they are not

as broken

             as you think

 

out into the skies

                  the bird it flies

                                    spreading its wings

       a pretty thing

was freed from a cage

                 that was filled with rage

                   but after leaving

  it's moment came

              not forgetten

just played

          a heartless game.

Author's Note

made after a necklace i saw that said "free as a bird' and sorta refers to hunger games please review

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This is a beautiful and inspiring poem.

[Buddhistboy73]

I really liked this piece, but I will admit that I am not so keen on the final two lines. They don't seem to fit with the upbeat rest of the poem. But great message, good visual imagery here, and I was on the journey with you...:) Good write...look forward to reading more of your work....BB

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

omg! I got that necklace for vicky!! LOL yaay, so i sorta inspired u :D