Melody Lights

Melody Lights

A Poem by paradise

Shallow pools

         glitter sparks

    firework lights

            striped remarks

 

sunshine shower

       flower shine

                         moonlight eclipse

               waterfall cries

 

flux with flow

         broken leaves

winter snow

            swaying trees

  

waves crash

          listen close

melodies play

        soft notes

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
Again 3 am so please dont remind me how strange it is it seemed oki at the time :$

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Nice rhyming throughout, none of it seems forced at all and it works really well at the end. I love those last two lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is very sweet......

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This entire read felt very ambient,I closed my eyes after reading a line or two and really felt it.I also really enjoyed the font you chose because that had a great effect on the way the poem felt.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one is not time dependent - so 3AM doesn't define its existence... I like the aftertaste.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2011
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