With You

With You

A Poem by paradise

No I didnt want to say this

I didnt want to metion it

but the way things

are going

I just had to say

 

Vintage keys

with fellow pleas

moonlight dancer

mellow trees

 

Ballon wonder

watch it take flight

I want you here

stay with me tonight

 

Stars come out

lets wish and shout

grass with flow

the moon willl glow

 

Classic games

lets go

not tamed

 

Blanket forts

lets build

not destroy

that kiss you give

me gives me joy

 

~.~

 

Baby I love you so f*****g much

happy 3 months :)

Its funny how we are still best friends

© 2012 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
Fuckkk yeaa

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Very nice poem. I like this a lot. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome poem! So romantic and I love the imagery that it fills up in my mind :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple yet amazing. You're a true writer

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that is really nice poem. i like your simole way of writing without caring for limits rhymes and so...great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good job, lots of energy.

Posted 7 Years Ago


good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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