Because I'm in love with an angel..

Yes, this is dedicated to him...

Crying, trying to be what you need

But I have no guide, no path, no lead

 

Why won't you just help me?

Be everything I need to be

Life is crazy and full of stress

But with you, I'm relaxed, I confess

I love you

That much is true

But I'm scared

That you'll say you never really cared

That one day you won't be here

And currently, that's my biggest fear

To be left all alone

Stuck in this dark and depressed zone

With no comfort but this tempting knife

Plus the remains of an out of control life

 

You're all I see

You're what keeps me free

Free from hurt and sadness

From the addicting bliss

Of piercing my skin

Again and again

Please just tell me you'll stay

And never fly away

Because I'm in love with an angel...

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

Amazing, the emotion is all there.

[Morning Star (SJA)]

I think that you are an angel too. Often people who experience the most hardship are, because their hearts are so open.
Love
Morning Star

[ForeverNever]

@Kailer: He's my saving grace

[Kaylor Mason]

Even angels can lose their wings from time to time . . . takes a little love to get them airborne again :) This poem is wonderful! Whoever your angel is, it's obvious you love him very much

[Laura Maidah]

SPaG has no issues. Pacing is fabulous. Easy to finish. Memorable. Meter is on point. Diction is dynamic and versatile. Nice work! I almost wish I were more angelic of a human being by the end of this. The third to last stanza is as addicting as bliss is portrayed to me. The "ss" sounds contrast with the smooth vowels and "theaddicitngbliss" just rolls off the tongue.

[Boy of the red]

Spectacular!