I wanna

Cant sleep so im listning to the rain fall
feeling shy wishing I cld take ur phone call
your always on my mind I can see you when I close my eyes
up all night just so I can tell you good morning. Before the sun rise
also thinking of things I wanna do with you
I wanna dance with you
i wanna hold you tight
i wanna kiss you slow
i wanna say good night
i wanna be there for you every single day
i dnt wanna sound obsessed but I wish u wernt so far away
but theres nothing I can do I wonder if i even care
just as long as were together and the love is still there <3
~Forever TheLoner~

Author's Note

something i wrote for a woman spoiler: the love wasnt there

Reviews

[Uroš D. Stojanov..]

Awesomely written! I love it 'cause there's a lot of rhyme in it, so it was really fun for me to read. Ending is really cool and also my favorite part:

"but theres nothing I can do I wonder if i even care
just as long as were together and the love is still there"

Keep on the good work and keep writing like this...

[Btwixer]

very nicely written and expressed

[Guavaguy]

Pretty Generic, give it a 70 cause it flows well. Unfortunately, it seems to be just as cliche as anything else. I guess thats just my take, can't change the theme without changing the poem, yknow? Anyway, good luck, the poem is nice but its nothing special.