I dont care

I dont care

A Poem by Forever true

This pain
That surrounds me
Devours all
That remains
It draged me
From hero to zero
Turning me into nothing
But a ghost
Who hosts all that is wrong
A failure
Whos lost their hope
And flair
Unable to respark the spark
Ive gotten lost in the dark
I lost all
As well as my reason
But i simply
Do not care

© 2017 Forever true


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I love these lines
"This pain
That surrounds me
Devours all
That remains"
great job I look forward to seeing what you do next

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. something I can truly relate to. thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahh, the song of "I've had it with everything". :) Brilliant job, mate.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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