When all is said and done

I have ventured far and wide,

Seen the world a thousand times over,

I have heard songs of the world sung,

And have heard words of passion spoken unto me,

but when all is said and done,

I have not seen a beauty as divine,

As the smile on your face when I returned.

I have read the words of poets,

And I have spoken them time and time again, 

I have watched the clock tick,

Simply to pass the time,

I conquered the worlds obstacles,

And trodden my fears before me,

But no accomplishment I acquire,

Will match the journey with you.

The moon has risen and fallen,

The sun it's brother has too,

Through night and day,

My path ever determined,

To promise I will always,

Return back to you.   

Reviews

[Cree Nations]

"The moon has risen and fallen, The sun it's brother has too, Through night and day My path ever determined, To promise I will always, Return back to you. "

Such beautiful sentiments....Return back to you....speaks of an unbreakable bond.

[Ariana H]

Such a beautiful poem(:

[Lydia]

I really enjoyed this. Nicely written and expressed.

[allie_arrowz]

that was very beautiful. you communicate your feelings wonderfully, i can totally relate to this poem. :)

[ShadowWalker]

very nicely done....i bow to your superior skills :P

[Coyote Poetry]

"I have not seen a beauty as divine,
As the smile on your face when I returned."
No better luck then to have someone waiting with love and a kind smile. I like your description and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautifully tender and romantic!

[Whiskurz]

This is such a beautiful and heartfelt piece......Whisk