Nightflyer

Nightflyer

A Poem by Fran Marie
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vampire

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Warning
This Poem is rated Mature and may contain material unsuitable for readers under 18.

 

Pitch black,it was a freezing night mixed with rain

a night filled with blood, would filled this vampire's aim

 

                Nightflyer is my name

                going for the jugular  vein

 

Streets were nearly bare upon this dreadful night

merely a handful of victims within my sight

oh, but a main attraction caught my evil eye

and my deadly intention,that he soon would die

 

                for  Nightflyer am I

                hunting my prey with evil eye

 

He staggered from the cafe and fumbled for his car key

Oh! drunkard fool was he

In one fell swoop I had him pinned

into my darkest spin of sin

  

                A Nightflyer has no shame

                a bloodbath scene is my game

 

My shameless advances held him spellbound

as I drank his blood~spinning him into death's dream

thereafter leaving him spent on the bare ground

excerising my cold  and heartless calculated scheme

 

                Nightflyer,oh yes, yes I am

                beware, be warned, or be damned!

 

Oh the taste of night's drunken blood

mingled with lust, sweat and love

satisfying my vampire's need

draining sweet blood as they bleed

 

               this Nightflyer sated to delight

               by dark cool blood on a pitch black night


© 2010 Fran Marie



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This... is amazing. This is perhaps one of the best stories in verse I have ever read. Simply astounding. I loved Anne Rice's Vampire Chronicles, and this piece brought my favorite series to mind.

I especially liked how you offset the parts told from "Nightflyer's" perspective, while the other bit was at the normal margin. I also liked the 4-2-4-2 pattern (which you kept consistent... great job).

I think italicising the entire piece added an extra bit of mystery to it.

I loved this piece. It was superb.

Posted 2 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.



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Oh... WOW. Amazing!! I absolutely love the rhyming scheme , and how you set of Nightlfyer's thoughts from the rest of the poem. I love vampires so much, and this reminded me of how much i need to start reading those new vampire series that're out!! Anyway, AWESOME poem, simply amazing, love it! :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


I like your vampire. He/She loves what he/she is, no remorse at all.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice poem of a vampire attacking in the dark night.
It's like part of a larger story of this vamp.

Really enjoyed this alot!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a few spelling errors but nothing bad, very nice.

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

And still this is an AWWWWWWESOME PIECE. I love the way you formated it. Very interesting. And the picture is just a fishing pole, if you don't mind me saying, it brought me in the moment I looked at it. Very dark and menacing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Wow, I really liked this. A story told in rhyme. Well depicted, I found myself feeling the Nightflyer's desire and sharing in her pleasure at taking the life through the blood. Well written. Thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

very spooky told like a song or rhyme almost lol

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You entered this piece in my contest and although it is amazing, my contest is onnly for books and stories. I have read several vampire books, but this poem almost summurizes all of my favorites. Thank you for the submission and I'm sorry I can not consider it due to the rule or conditions of the contest.

Posted 1 Year Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I love this! Well-written!
This brought to my mind the right feelings, this reminds me why I am drawn to darkness and vampires
It's wonderful how you did it.



Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AWWWWWWSOME!!!!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


3 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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